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6．假如你是某外國語學(xué)校學(xué)生李華，第九屆金磚國家峰會(huì)（The Ninth BRICS Summit）將在你居住的城市舉辦．組委會(huì)現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員．請(qǐng)按要求用英文給組委會(huì)寫一封信．內(nèi)容包括：
1．個(gè)人情況：年齡、性別；
2．個(gè)人條件：英、法語愛好，關(guān)注時(shí)事、政治和經(jīng)濟(jì)，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地；
3．本人承諾：提供最佳服務(wù)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Sir and Madam，
     My name is Li Hua．
I would like to serve as a volunteer for the coming The Ninth BRICS Summit．
I am a 17-year-old Senior Three student ata Foreign LanguageSchool and I am good at English and French．I enjoy talking with foreigners．（高分句型一）
I believe I would do a good job at the Summit．First of all，Iam fond of politics and economyand I know the city very well； secondly，I can easily get along with others，which is important for a volunteer and also，I'm ready to offer my help whenever needed．（高分句型二）I make a promise that if I were to be chosen as a youth volunteer，I would offer the best service possible to the people at the Summit．（高分句型三）
Please consider my request，and I'm looking forward to your reply．

Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，第九屆金磚國家峰會(huì)（The Ninth BRICS Summit）將在你居住的城市舉辦．組委會(huì)現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員．請(qǐng)按要求用英文給組委會(huì)寫一封信．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意要適當(dāng)拓展，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：First of all，首先；secondly其次；make a promise作出承諾；look  forward to盼望
   I am a 17-year-old Senior Three student at a Foreign Language School and I am good at English and French．I enjoy talking with foreigners．（高分句型一）
Secondly，I can easily get along with others，which is important for a volunteer and also，I'm ready to offer my help whenever needed．（高分句型二）
I make a promise that if I were to be chosen as a youth volunteer，I would offer the best service possible to the people at the Games．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
     My name is Li Hua．I would like to serve as a volunteer for the coming The Ninth BRICS Summit．
     I am a 17-year-old Senior Three student at a Foreign Language School and I am good at English and French．I enjoy talking with foreigners．（高分句型一）
     I believe I would do a good job at the Summit．First of all，I am fond of  politics and economy and I know the city very well； secondly，I can easily get along with others，which is important for a volunteer and also，I'm ready to offer my help whenever needed．（高分句型二）I make a promise that if I were to be chosen as a youth volunteer，I would offer the best service possible to the people at the Summit．（高分句型三）
     Please consider my request，and I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．