Question

14．看書、看電視、玩電腦、體育運動、參加社會活動等．你喜歡做什么？請結(jié)合下面的提示詞，以My Spare Time為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀愕臉I(yè)余生活．你是如何合理安排的呢？說說你的想法和理由．
提示詞語：busy，play，healthy，knowledge，housework，relax，volunteer，colorful
要求：
1．短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上提示的內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，條理清楚．有表達(dá)自己觀點的句子．
3．不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和地名．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school．
高分句型二：
So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time．
句型一  that we can't learn at school．該句是一個由that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，that在從句中作賓語，替代前面提到的先行詞knowledge．
句型二 reading books is the best way of…該句的主語是一個動名詞短語組成，當(dāng)句子主語為動名詞或者動名詞短語時，應(yīng)注意謂語使用單數(shù)
此外，該文章中還有以下重要短語和詞匯：
be busy with 忙于某事   the best way of doing sth 做某事的最好方式   be in need 需要
重要句型和重點短語的結(jié)合使用，使得文章表達(dá)更有層次，表達(dá)更為準(zhǔn)確

解答 I am a middle school student．Though I'm busy with my lessons，my spare time is still colorful．After school I usually play sports．I like basketball and football very much．Sports help me to keep healthy and study better．I often do some reading in the evening．I think books are our best friends．They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school．（高分句型一）So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time．（高分句型二）Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet．（業(yè)余生活描述）I find it's a good way to relax myself．At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world．At the weekends I often help my parents with the housework．I clean the house，wash clothes and learn to cook．During the summer or winter vacation，I have enough time to do things like volunteering．I help those people who are in need．It's a good experience for me．I enjoy myself in my spare time．

點評 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時不要僅僅對要點進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．