Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

Many students fail to perform well in an exam not because they lack ability, but because of the unique pressure of the exam room—the tense atmosphere, the ticking clock on the wall, the teacher walking around, and the thought that their future will be decided by the exam.

    It’s not just students who will face pressure. Human beings are competitive animals and we decide to evaluate each other, whether in exams, in job interviews or even on romantic dates, so all of us occasionally get nervous. Removing pressure from life is an impossible dream.

    However, there are some ways which can help reduce our pressure. It turns out that we are far more likely to overcome the pressure when we are as familiar as possible with the situation we are about to face. Of course, even when we are well-prepared, we may still feel nervous, but at least we will be more equipped to deal with our nervousness than if we have failed to prepare. Furthermore, we may also benefit from reminding ourselves that the big moment is not that big after all from a different perspective. Even a huge exam is not as important as a loving family, or good health.

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；

2. 然后以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)“壓力”的看法， 內(nèi)容包括：

 （1）正確面對(duì)壓力的重要性;

 （2）作為高三的學(xué)生，你通常面臨哪些壓力？

  (3) 你在生活和學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)對(duì)壓力的措施。

【寫(xiě)作要求】

1、在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2、作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

The writer mainly tells us not only students but also other people would feel stressed on different occasions. Also, he gives some suggestions on how to reduce pressure.

     As far as I ‘m concerned, pressure is part of life. It’s quite natural for us to feel stressed occasionally, at an exam, or when speaking to a stranger. So it’s of great importance to have a right attitude towards pressure. What we need to do is to relax ourselves and face the challenge positively and initiatively.

As Senior 3 students, we have to deal with some grown-up problems and make decisions by ourselves. Family can be one of the biggest causes of stress, such as problems with arguing with parents or brothers or sisters. We also have lots of stress from school, either from our classmates or teachers. However, the greatest pressure comes from study, which worries most of us as the National Matriculation Test is approaching. We also feel stressed about choosing our education after high school or not affording to go to university.

     In order to reduce pressure, first, a balanced diet and enough sleep are necessary; secondly,   I would schedule my study properly so that I can have time to do sports or listen to music; also, friendship, support from my parents and encouragement from my teachers can help me a lot. I would try every means to relax myself and work with high efficiency to achieve my goal. 

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。首先要看懂文章內(nèi)容，以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容。然后以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)“壓力”的看法， 內(nèi)容包括：（1）正確面對(duì)壓力的重要性;（2）作為高三的學(xué)生，你通常面臨哪些壓力？(3) 你在生活和學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)對(duì)壓力的措施。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】What we need to do is to relax ourselves and face the challenge positively and initiatively.含有一個(gè)主語(yǔ)從句；However, the greatest pressure comes from study, which worries most of us as the National Matriculation Test is approaching.包含一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類書(shū)面表達(dá)