Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\ )劃掉。

注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分

Life is not easy for any of us. We will unavoidably suffered bitterness and sadness from failure. Thus, there is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world. Most important, you will have an optimistic effect at the people around you. We all will live harmonious and happy life. It is good for our health as well.

However, sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others, but when you fail in doing nothing, you may have a bad mood. If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possibly. As we all know, every coin has two sides. So you should think more about its bright side. We are sure that everything will be better with time passed by.

Remember: only you can make himself happy.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】suffered→suffer

【2】there→it

【3】important→importantly

【4】at→on

【5】在live之后加a

【6】but→or

【7】nothing→something

【8】possibly→possible

【9】passed→passing

【10】himself→yourself

【解析】

試題分析：生活對我們任何一個人來說都不容易。記住：只有自己才能使自己開心。

【1】suffered→suffer 助動詞will后面用動詞原形，故把suffered改為suffer。

【2】there→it 此處不是there be句型，而是it作形式主語，動詞不定式作真正的主語，故把there改為it。

【3】important→importantly 副詞修飾整個句子，故把important改為importantly。

【4】at→on 固定詞組：have an effect on sth.對……產生影響，故把at改為on。

【5】在live之后加a 固定形式：live a...life，表示“過著……的生活”。故在live之后加a。

【6】but→or 句意：當你和別人爭吵或做某事失敗時，你會有一個壞的情緒。故把but 改為 or。

【7】nothing→something 句意：失敗做某事。故把nothing 改為 something。

【8】possibly→possible as ...as possible盡可能……。故把possibly改為 possible。

【9】passed→passing with的獨立主格結構，time與pass是主動關系，故把passed 改為passing。

【10】himself→yourself 句意：只有你才能使你自己開心。故把himself改為 yourself。

【知識拓展】

1.with ＋名詞（代詞）＋現(xiàn)在分詞

She stood there chatting with her friend, with her child playing beside her．她站在那兒跟朋友閑聊，孩子在旁邊玩。

2.with ＋名詞（代詞）＋過去分詞

The goalkeeper left Japan with his flaws laid bare．這位守門員離開了日本，而他的缺點卻暴露無遺。3. 3.with ＋名詞（代詞）＋不定式

With 10 minutes to go, you’d better hurry．還有十分鐘，你最好快一點。

With you to lead us, our group is sure to succeed．有你領導我們，我們組肯定能成功。