Question

第二節(jié)：書(shū)面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你將作為新華中學(xué)高三畢業(yè)生代表，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)在畢業(yè)晚會(huì)上用英文作一個(gè)告別演講:

1．感謝家人，朋友和老師。特別舉例感謝某個(gè)老師（不用真名，一律使用Mr. Zheng），并寫(xiě)出原因。

2．回顧高中三年的生活。列舉出你印象深刻的活動(dòng)。

3．展望未來(lái)。

注意：開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，所寫(xiě)部分120字左右。

Dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Xnhua High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2010!

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Finally, best wishes to the Class of 2010．Thank you very much.

Answer 1

Possible version：

Dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Xinhua High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2010!

First, let me thank all our families and friends for their love and support on behalf of the graduates. I also want to thank our diligent teachers for guiding us through to this moment. My personal thanks to Mr Zheng, you got me through Math when I had given up hope.

Graduation is a time to go over enjoyable memories which have been made over the past three years. Many events become so vivid in my mind at this moment, military training, soccer and basketball games.

However, graduation is also a time to look forward to the future in front of us. No matter what you plan next, I hope you can go about it positively. Each of you will create your own unique path. Let’s remember the saying “attitude determines altitude”. Please always keep a smile on your face.

Finally, best wishes to the Class of 2010．Thank you very much.

解析:

1、本文是一個(gè)演講稿，屬于提綱類作文。寫(xiě)作材料貼近學(xué)生生活，能夠給學(xué)生較大的發(fā)揮空間。

2、寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中要用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛠?lái)表達(dá)上述三個(gè)三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容。

3、注意要考慮運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)。