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5．你升入高中快兩年了，這一年多你經(jīng)歷了很多，也收獲很多，請你給你的父母寫一封信，告訴他們你這一年多來的高中生活，信中需包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1、離開父母，學(xué)會了獨(dú)立；
2、升入高中以來認(rèn)識了很多優(yōu)秀的同學(xué)和老師，和他們中的很多人交了朋友，并從他們身上學(xué)到了很多東西；
3、喜歡學(xué)習(xí)數(shù)學(xué)和英語，對自己的成績很滿意；
4、課余時間參加各種課外活動，比如英語角．
注意：
1、短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含以上全部信息，可補(bǔ)充說明或強(qiáng)調(diào)順序以使短文連貫，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總數(shù)．
2、詞數(shù)100左右
Dear Mom and Dad，
How time flies!
It is almost two years since I entered the senior high school．Now I′d like to tell you something about my school life．
As I'm away from you，I have learned how to live on my own．And I've got to know my classmates and teachers，from whom I've learned a lot．To my joy，I've also made friends with some of them．
I like English and math best and have make great progress．I'm pleased about that．SO don't worry about my grades．Besides，in my spare time，I often take part in deferent kinds of after-school activities．I often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English．As a result，I'm good at English．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Wang Zhen．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你升入高中快兩年了，這一年多你經(jīng)歷了很多，也收獲很多，請你給你的父母寫一封信，告訴他們你這一年多來的高中生活，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：離開父母，學(xué)會了獨(dú)立；升入高中以來認(rèn)識了很多優(yōu)秀的同學(xué)和老師，和他們中的很多人交了朋友，并從他們身上學(xué)到了很多東西；喜歡學(xué)習(xí)數(shù)學(xué)和英語，對自己的成績很滿意；課余時間參加各種課外活動，比如英語角．
  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be away from遠(yuǎn)離；on one's own屬于某人自己的；To my joy令我高興的是；make great progress取得巨大進(jìn)步；Besides另外；take part in 參加；As a result結(jié)果；

解答 Dear Mom and Dad，
       How time flies!
       It is almost two years since I entered the senior high school．Now I′d like to tell you something about my school life．
       As I'm away from you，I have learned how to live on my own．And I've got to know my classmates and teachers，from whom I've learned a lot．To my joy，I've also made friends with some of them．
       I like English and math best and have make great progress．I'm pleased about that．SO don't worry about my grades．Besides，in my spare time，I often take part in deferent kinds of after-school activities．I often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English．As a result，I'm good at English．
       Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Wang Zhen

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．