假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處,多者（從第l1處起）不計(jì)分。
My mother always bought gifts to me for my birthdays. With my fifteen birthday around the corner, she asked me I wanted. For the first time, I realize how lucky I was to have been born in such a fortunate family. I was satisfying and there was nothing more I needed. That was because I told my mother that instead of get an expensive gift, I’d love to use the money to help others. At the first , she felt surprised. When she realized I was seriously, she offered me 500 yuan. I bought some toys and went to the orphanage(孤兒院) in our city. I handed out the toys to the child and had a good time with them.


【小題1】to 改成for
【小題2】fifteen 改成fifteenth
【小題3】me后面加what
【小題4】realize 改成realized
【小題5】satisfying改成 satisfied
【小題6】because 改成why
【小題7】get 改成getting
【小題8】去掉the
【小題9】seriously改成 serious
【小題10】child 改成children

解析試題分析：作者在生日的時(shí)候，總是會(huì)收到媽媽的禮物，在14歲生日的時(shí)候，作者想到那些需要幫助的人，決定用買禮物的錢幫助那些孤兒院的孩子。
【小題1】媽媽總是在我生日的時(shí)候，給我買禮物。Buy sth to sb“給某人買”：to 改成for
【小題2】在我15歲生日要來臨的時(shí)候。這里用序數(shù)詞：fifteen 改成fifteenth
【小題3】媽媽問我想要什么。What應(yīng)該的是賓語從句：me后面加what
【小題4】我意識(shí)到出生在這樣一個(gè)家庭是多么幸運(yùn)。這里是過去的事情，用一般過去式：realize 改成realized
【小題5】我們滿意不需要什么了。修飾人，用satisfied
【小題6】這就是為什么我告訴媽媽不要買昂貴的禮物，我要用這個(gè)錢幫助別人。That is because 那就是因?yàn)�，改成that is why那就是為什么
【小題7】instead of后面接動(dòng)名詞get 改成getting
【小題8】at first“首先”去掉the
【小題9】當(dāng)她意識(shí)到我的認(rèn)真的。做表語，用形容詞：seriously改成 serious
【小題10】我把禮物分發(fā)給孩子們和他們玩得很高興。Child是可是名詞，這里用復(fù)數(shù)： 改成children
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