Question

15．假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文．請你根據(jù)下列要點寫回信．
要點：1．參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班；
2．看中文書刊、電視
3．學(xué)唱中文歌曲
4．交中國朋友
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右
2．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫
3．開頭語己為你寫好
June 8，2008
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．
Here are a few suggestions．First，it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．（高分句型一）Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．（高分句型二）
Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily．（高分句型三）You can also make more Chinese friends．They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．
Try to write to me in Chinese next time．
Best wishes，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 建議信要寫出寫信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容及提出建議的理由和根據(jù)．理由要合情合理，語氣一定要緩和．因此建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力．建議信一般采取"三段式結(jié)構(gòu)"． 1．首段：建議信的開頭必須指明建議的前提和事情的原委，對自己的立場作一些解釋．建議信開頭常用的句式和套話 ①I'm writing to express my views concerning…②Thanks for trusting me.2．中段：應(yīng)圍繞問題有條理、科學(xué)婉轉(zhuǎn)地提出建議．注意充分考慮對方的實際情況，表達時應(yīng)選擇得體用語．切忌用語生硬，泛泛而談．通常以firstly，secondly，thirdly或to begin with，then，later等順序陳述建議．表達建議常用的句式和套話 ①I feel that it would be helpful if…②If I were you，I would…③As far as I'm concerned…④In my opinion…⑤As for me…3．尾段：簡單表達希望．希望自己的建議能對對方有幫助．通常要在建議信的結(jié)尾部分闡明你所提供的勸告或建議僅供對方參考．建議信結(jié)尾常用的句式和套語 ①I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful．②I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in future details．
【亮點說明】這篇范文的特點是語言簡潔，也不乏重點句型和語法知識：it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．這句話用了it做形式主語和as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．這句話用了省略句，還有范文還使用了 First，Then，Besides，這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫．
First，it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．（高分句型一）
Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．（高分句型二）
 Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．
       Here are a few suggestions．First，it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．（高分句型一）Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．（高分句型二）
       Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily．（高分句型三）You can also make more Chinese friends．They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．
       Try to write to me in Chinese next time．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．