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假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫得以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加： 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

  2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

Many years ago, I was travelling in the northwest of Indian. One evening, after hunting in the

                                           

forest all day, I was returning alone to the place which I had put up my tent. It was growing dark

                                       

but I was walking along a narrow path. On my right was a wide river, and on my left , thick dark

                                                                

forest. Suddenly, I saw two eyes looking at me from among the trees. A tiger was about to jump

 

on me. What should I do? Should I jump into the river and hoped to save my life by swimming?

                                             

I looked to the right. In the river there was a huge crocodile waited to welcome me with its

                                               

mouth widely open. I was so frightened that I closed my eyes. When I opened it, what do you

                                         

think was happened? The tiger had jumped right over me and was now in the mouth of the

  

crocodile. Believe or not!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Many years ago, I was travelling in the northwest of Indian. One evening, after hunting in the

                                            India

forest all day, I was returning alone to the place which I had put up my tent. It was growing dark

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but I was walking along a narrow path. On my right was a wide river, and on my left,^ thick dark

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forest. Suddenly, I saw two eyes looking at me from among the trees. A tiger was about to jump

 

on me. What should I do? Should I jump into the river and hoped to save my life by swimming?

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I looked to the right. In the river there was a huge crocodile waited to welcome me with its

                                                    waiting

mouth widely open. I was so frightened that I closed my eyes. When I opened it, what do you

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think was happened? The tiger had jumped right over me and was now in the mouth of the

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crocodile. Believe ^or not!

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