Question

10．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班學(xué)生李華．在高考前剩下的日子里，你的朋友Peter想了解你的計劃，請你給他寫一封回信．信的內(nèi)容包括：
1．你的計劃和愿望是什么？
2．你打算如何實現(xiàn)你的愿望．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫；
3．短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息．
Dear Peter，
I am more than glad to hear from you．In your last letter you asked me about my plans in the coming months and I'd like to tell you something about it．
As you know，the biggest event for us is College Entrance Examinations，for which all the senior students are sparing no efforts to make preparations．（高分句型一）Thus，I must make good use of the rest valuable days to strengthen my ability to face it．So I hope I can try my best in the exams and be admitted to a key university．In addition，I am also eager to be healthy both physically and mentally．Therefore，doing regular reading and exercise is necessary for me in my spare time．（高分句型二）
All in all，I firmly believe that I'll have a busy but meaningful life this year．（高分句型三）What about you？Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班學(xué)生李華．在高考前剩下的日子里，你的朋友Peter想了解你的計劃，請你給他寫一封回信．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：你的計劃和愿望是什么？你打算如何實現(xiàn)你的愿望．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：more than非常；As you know眾所周知；Thus因此；make good use of充分利用；In addition另外；Therefore因此；All in all總之；
As you know，the biggest event for us is College Entrance Examinations，for which all the senior students are sparing no efforts to make preparations．（高分句型一）
Therefore，doing regular reading and exercise is necessary for me in my spare time．（高分句型二）
All in all，I firmly believe that I'll have a busy but meaningful life this year．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       I am more than glad to hear from you．In your last letter you asked me about my plans in the coming months and I'd like to tell you something about it．
       As you know，the biggest event for us is College Entrance Examinations，for which all the senior students are sparing no efforts to make preparations．（高分句型一）Thus，I must make good use of the rest valuable days to strengthen my ability to face it．So I hope I can try my best in the exams and be admitted to a key university．In addition，I am also eager to be healthy both physically and mentally．Therefore，doing regular reading and exercise is necessary for me in my spare time．（高分句型二）
       All in all，I firmly believe that I'll have a busy but meaningful life this year．（高分句型三）What about you？Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．