Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們班上周組織了一次“講述英雄故事”的主題班會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述整個(gè)過(guò)程。

注意： 詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞： 退役軍人veteran

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week, we held a class meeting themed “Telling stories of heroes”, which is memorable.

Before the class meeting, our teacher informed us the theme and divided us into groups as we wished. All of us got involved in it. After making a clear division, two of our group interviewed a veteran; others searched for relevant materials on-line. Then we got together to prepare for our presentation.

On the presenting day, I vividly told the stories of some heroes like the interviewed veteran. When I finished my speech, all audience including my teacher were touched by what heroes had done and applauded for them. Throughout the whole class meeting, we were immersed in the deeds of heroes in different fields and periods. Some of us were even in tears. In the end, our teacher made a brief but sound summary and called on us to carry on their spirit in every aspect of our lives.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇圖畫作文，假定你是李華，你們班上周組織了一次“講述英雄故事”的主題班會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述整個(gè)過(guò)程。

這是一篇圖畫作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)將圖畫所反映的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前，要認(rèn)真分析圖畫，將四幅圖的內(nèi)容有機(jī)地連接起來(lái)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。上下文要意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

分析圖畫可知，第一幅圖：老師要求以“英雄故事”為主題開展一次班會(huì)；第二幅圖：學(xué)生分為幾組。我們小組中的兩個(gè)人采訪了一位老兵。其他人在線搜索相關(guān)材料，然后聚在一起準(zhǔn)備我們的演講。第三幅圖：我生動(dòng)地講述了一些英雄的故事，例如被采訪的退伍軍人的事跡。當(dāng)我結(jié)束演講時(shí)，聽(tīng)眾都為英雄所做的事而感動(dòng)并為他們鼓掌。第四幅圖：最后，我們的老師做了總結(jié)，并呼吁我們?cè)谏�活的各個(gè)方面繼續(xù)傳遞他們的英雄精神。根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和短語(yǔ)有：hold a class meeting，inform us the theme，divide us into groups，got involved in，interview a veteran，search for relevant materials on-line，prepare for our presentation，tell the stories of some heroes，finish my speech，applaud for，make a brief summary，call on us to carry on their spirit�？梢允褂玫你暯釉~：1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all等；2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)等。通過(guò)詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。