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3．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞．
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
I will spend the summer holiday in the country next year．Although the city is modern and convenience，there are still some problem，such as air pollution and noise．In the country，I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life．There，the air was fresh and the water is clean．Trees are green and birds are sung．I can also go  boating，fishing and swimming in the lake．What's most，I can climb the hills．All this will be interested and good for your health．Above all，I can go back to the nature．But I want to go to the country a change．I'm looking forward to my summer holiday．

Answer 1

分析 文章講述了我準備去鄉(xiāng)下過暑假的計劃．鄉(xiāng)下環(huán)境好，可以擺脫城市的吵雜，對健康有好處．期盼著我的假期．

解答 I will spend the summer holiday in the country next year．Although the city is modern and convenience，there are still some problem，such as air pollution and noise．In the country，I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life．There，the air was fresh and the water is clean．Trees are green and birds are sung．I can also go  boating，fishing and swimming in the lake．What's most，I can climb the hills．All this will be interested and good for your health．Above all，I can go back to the nature．But I want to go to the country∧a change．I'm looking forward to my summer holiday．
詳解：
1．convenience改為convenient；形容詞錯誤．句中convenient和modern并列作系動詞的表語，要用形容詞形式．
2．problem改為problems；名詞錯誤．句中有some修飾，可數(shù)名詞要用復數(shù)形式．
3．was改為is；時態(tài)錯誤．文章講述的是客觀事實，要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．
4．sung改為singing；分詞錯誤．句中sing與主語birds構成主謂關系，要用現(xiàn)在分詞構成進行時態(tài)．
5．most改為more；短語搭配錯誤．what's more而且，常用短語．
6．interested改為interesting；分詞錯誤．句中interest作系動詞的表語，表示主語this的特征和屬性，要用現(xiàn)在分詞來構成．
7．your改為my；代詞錯誤．句意指代的是我，要用對應的形容詞性物主代詞．
8．the去掉；冠詞錯誤．句中nature指大自然，不用冠詞．
9．But改為So；連詞錯誤．句意表達的是因果關系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折．
10．加for；短語搭配錯誤．for a change換個口味，改變一下．

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎知識．�？嫉闹�識點有：名詞（單復數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．