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14．假如你是學(xué)生會主席Li Hua，請根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生會邀請本校學(xué)生參加有關(guān)環(huán)保講座的發(fā)言稿．內(nèi)容主要包括：
參加者：高中一、二年級的學(xué)生；
時間：5月14日，下午2點；
地點：學(xué)校報告廳．
注意事項：（1）．準(zhǔn)時到場，聽講座時保持安靜；
（2）不攜帶零食和飲料進入報告廳；
（3）參加者在本周五前到學(xué)生會報名；
（4）最后鼓勵同學(xué)們踴躍參加．
詞數(shù)：100左右
報告廳 school hall；  報名 sign up for
Good afternoon，everyone．
May I have your attention，please？
I am Li Hua from the Student Union．As you know，our school will hold a lecture on environment protection on May 14th at 2：00 p．m．in the school hall．The students of Senior 1 and Senior 2 are welcomed．
By the way，I would like you to t urn up on time and keep quiet when attending the lecture．It is not permitted to bring snacks and drinks into the hall．The students who are interested in this lecture should sign up for it before Friday．
I am firmly convinced that only when everybody attaches great importance to protecting the environment can the earth become a better place for us to live on．In conclusion，I sincerely hope that everybody can take an active part in the lecture，and I am looking forward to your coming．
Student Union
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生會邀請本校學(xué)生參加有關(guān)環(huán)保講座的發(fā)言稿．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一演講的時間地點和參加者；二注意事項；三保護環(huán)境的重要性并且鼓勵同學(xué)們踴躍參加．
高分句型：
1．The students who are interested in this lecture should sign up for it before Friday．句子里 who 引導(dǎo)定語從句修飾先行詞The students； sign up for 表示"報名參加"．
對這個演講感興趣的同學(xué)在本周五前到學(xué)生會報名．
2．I am firmly convinced that only when everybody attaches great importance to protecting the environment can the earth become a better place for us to live on．句子里 that 引導(dǎo)賓語從句；only 位于狀語從句when everybody attaches great importance to protecting the environment 之前，主句 can the earth become a better place for us to live on．用倒裝；attaches great importance to 表示重視．
我堅定的相信指，只有人人都重視保護環(huán)境，地球才會更適合我們居�。�

解答 Good afternoon，everyone．
May I have your attention，please？
I am Li Hua from the Student Union．As you know，our school will hold a lecture on environment protection on May 14th at 2：00 p．m．in the school hall．The students of Senior 1 and Senior 2 are welcomed．（演講的時間地點和參加者）
By the way，I would like you to t urn up on time and keep quiet when attending the lecture．It is not permitted to bring snacks and drinks into the hall．The students who are interested in this lecture should sign up for it before Friday．【高分句型一】（注意事項）
I am firmly convinced that only when everybody attaches great importance to protecting the environment can the earth become a better place for us to live on．【高分句型二】In conclusion，I sincerely hope that everybody can take an active part in the lecture，and I am looking forward to your coming．（保護環(huán)境的重要性并且鼓勵同學(xué)們踴躍參加）
                                                                   Student Union
                                                                       Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文一般給出的要點比較多，但是無論是漢語還是英文的要點，我們在寫作時都要體現(xiàn)出來，因為他們是看卷老師的依據(jù)．同時，如果要求有自我發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容，那么也要表達出來，否則會被減分．