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2．假如你是王華，是星光中學的學生會主席．最近你校李平同學的母親被查出肺癌，治療需要大筆費用．但他家較貧困，也面臨輟學．現(xiàn)請你寫一封倡議書，號召全體同學伸出援助之手，幫助李平同學的家庭渡過難關．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右； 
 2．倡議書的開頭為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear fellow students．
As we all know，Li Ping is very excellent student in our school．He studies very hard and has been highly thought of by his teachers．Unfortunately，recently his mother has been diagnosed with lung cancer．As far as I'm concerned，it will cost too much to recover herself from such a serious disease．What's worse，his family isn't a rich one．If too much money has been spent on cure，there's no doubt that Li Ping will be forced to drop out of school．
As chairman of the Students'Union of Xingguang Middle School，I'll spare no efforts to give Li Ping a hand and donate some money to him．Here I also call on all of us to do the same to him．I just hope that our limited effort will make a difference to his family in need．
Yours，
Wang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇倡議書作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，關鍵是要向大家發(fā)出倡議，幫助這位同學．寫作時運用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱使用第三人稱和第一人稱，內(nèi)容要點包括：李平同學的母親被查出肺癌，治療需要大筆費用．但他家較貧困，也面臨輟學；最后作為學生會主席，發(fā)出倡議，號召全體同學伸出援助之手，幫助李平同學的家庭渡過難關．本文分為兩個段落即可，第一段介紹李萍的情況，第二段發(fā)出倡議．
重要的短語和句型：
be highly thought of受到高度評價              spare no efforts to do 不遺余力的做某事 
be diagnosed with被診斷為                     give sb a hand 幫某人一個忙
As far as I'm concerned據(jù)我所知              call on sb to do sth號召某人做某事
recover herself from康復                     make a difference產(chǎn)生影響 
What's worse更糟糕的是
As we all know，Li Ping is a very excellent student in our school．
本句為as引導的非限制性定語從句，同義表達還可以用As is known to us all．
If too much money has been spent on cure，there's no doubt that Li Ping will be forced to drop out of school．
本句為一主從復合句，if引導的一個條件狀語從句，there is no doubt that為一常用句型，毫無疑問，…．that引導的為一同位語從句，是對doubt的解釋說明．

解答 Dear fellow students，
      As we all know，Li Ping is a very excellent student in our school．（高分句型）He studies very hard and has been highly thought of by his teachers．Unfortunately，recently his mother has been diagnosed with lung cancer．As far as I'm concerned，it will cost too much to recover herself from such a serious disease．What's worse，his family isn't a rich one．If too much money has been spent on cure，there's no doubt that Li Ping will be forced to drop out of school．（高分句型）（介紹李萍的基本學習及家庭情況）
      As chairman of the Students'Union of Xingguang Middle School，I'll spare no efforts to give Li Ping a hand and donate some money to him．（高分句型）Here I also call on all of us to do the same to him．I just hope that our limited effort will make a difference to his family in need．（發(fā)出倡議）
                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                             Wang Hua

點評 這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來．動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．