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2．假如你是李華，你所在的國(guó)際學(xué)校打算舉行一次為期七天的"走進(jìn)世界名校"的夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你給美籍校長(zhǎng)Roy寫一封信申請(qǐng)參加．內(nèi)容包括：
1．你對(duì)夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)的了解（參觀名校，聽(tīng)教授演講和交外國(guó)朋友等）；
2．參加的意愿和理由．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr Roy，
I'm glad to know that you are going to hold a seven-day summer camp called"Walking into the World-famous Campus"．I have learned that there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities，attending professors'lectures，making foreign friends and so on，which I think are of great use to us high school students．
I have great interest in it．The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities．What's more，it will encourage me to study harder and improve my communication skills．
Thanks for your reading my application．I hope I will have a chance to take part in the activity．I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是給美籍校長(zhǎng)Roy寫一封信，申請(qǐng)參加"走進(jìn)世界名校"的夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)．內(nèi)容包括：一對(duì)夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)的了解；二參加的意愿和理由；三期盼得到答復(fù)．
高分句型：
1．I have learned that there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities，attending professors'lectures，making foreign friends and so on，which I think are of great use to us high school students．句子里 that 引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities，attending professors'lectures，making foreign friends and so on；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指前面there are 結(jié)構(gòu)；I think 是插入語(yǔ)；of great use=useful．
我已經(jīng)了解到，夏令營(yíng)里有各種各樣精彩的活動(dòng)，例如參觀名校，聽(tīng)教授演講和交外國(guó)朋友等，我認(rèn)為這些活動(dòng)對(duì)我們高中生有很大的用處．
2．The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities句子里that 引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句；gain much knowledge and experience 比賽"獲得知識(shí)和經(jīng)驗(yàn)"．
原因是我能夠從活動(dòng)里獲得知識(shí)和經(jīng)驗(yàn)．

解答 Dear Mr Roy，
     I'm glad to know that you are going to hold a seven-day summer camp called"Walking into the World-famous Campus"．I have learned that there are varieties of wonderful activities such as visiting famous universities，attending professors'lectures，making foreign friends and so on，which I think are of great use to us high school students．【高分句型一】（對(duì)夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)的了解）
I have great interest in it．The reason is that I can gain much knowledge and experience from activities．【高分句型二】What's more，it will encourage me to study harder and improve my communication skills．（參加的意愿和理由）
Thanks for your reading my application．I hope I will have a chance to take part in the activity．I'm looking forward to your early reply．（期盼得到答復(fù)）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

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