Question

【題目】進(jìn)入高三以來，同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力倍增。就此問題，最近你班開展了一次以“壓力”為主題的班會。在班會上，大家各抒己見，就如何緩解壓力提出了自己的看法。請你為學(xué)校英文報寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容要點包括：

1. 壓力的來源。

2. 壓力與成敗的關(guān)系。

3. 你自己的看法。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：不少于120詞；

2.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Recently we have held a class meeting to discuss the pressure upon Senior Three students.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, we have held a class meeting to discuss the pressure upon Senior Three students. As the university entrance exam is around the corner, we all feel the pressure is piling up. We are anxious that we’ll not live up to the expectations of parents and teachers.

Honestly speaking, on one hand， pressure is the source of motivation to success, which can contribute to personal progress. On the other hand, too much pressure can lead to failure. In that case, approaches to solving pressure seem of vital importance. As for me, communication counts. It can help me express my emotion and get relief.

To begin with, there must be sorrows we can’t go through by ourselves, which need sharing with others. Furthermore, by communicating with parents and teachers, we can get more supports. In one word, the more you show your troubles, the better others understand you. As a result, you are more likely to get help and improve yourself!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)�？忌�要把具體要點解釋清楚，不能有遺漏；還要闡述自己的觀點，這就要求考生適當(dāng)拓展發(fā)揮；在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，Second，Besides，What’s more等，讓文章有條理，行文流暢。本篇文章在寫作時力求簡潔，不要啰嗦。

【亮點說明】文章運用了一些詞組：around the corner 即將來臨，pile up堆積，live up to不辜負(fù)，contribute to有助于，lead to 導(dǎo)致，approaches to doing做…… 的方法。范文中的句式多變，運用不同的語法知識：the more you show your troubles, the better others understand you使用了比較級連用的句式。As the university entrance exam is around the corner,使用了狀語從句。which can contribute to personal progress 和which need sharing with others使用了非限制性定語從句。文章使用了Honestly speaking說句實話, on one hand ,on the other hand (一方面，另一方面), to begin with首先, furthermore并且, in one word總之, as a result這樣的詞使文章連貫，流暢，條理清楚。