Question

假如你是我市一名高三學(xué)生李華，你打算報(bào)考一所外語(yǔ)學(xué)院。你在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上看到上海外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)院的招生信息(admission information)，并對(duì)此非常感興趣。根據(jù)招生要求，你需要用英語(yǔ)撰寫一份個(gè)人申請(qǐng)報(bào)告，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

1．記述自己的個(gè)性特長(zhǎng)及取得的成果；

2．說(shuō)明進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的努力方向及設(shè)想等。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：不少于120；開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing to apply to study in your university.

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I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

 

Yours ,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I’m writing to apply to study in your university. I read about the admission information while surfing the net the other day. I’m really interested in it.

　　For one thing, I’m an outgoing girl and I can get on well with all my classmates. For another, I do well in most of my subjects, especially in English. I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies. Speeches delivered by famous people like Martin Luther. King, President Bush and so on, are also my favorite. What’s more, I once won the first prize in an English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellent performances. 

　　As we all know, English is a universal language and I like to communicate with different people, so I intend to major in English if I am admitted into your university. I want to have a job related to languages in the future and I believe I can help promote cultural communication between China and the world. 

　　I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. 

　　　　　　　　                                　               Yours, 

                                                             Li Hua

 

【解析】考察半開(kāi)放性作文

【寫作指導(dǎo)】

本文要求以李華的口吻撰寫一份個(gè)人申請(qǐng)報(bào)告報(bào)考上海外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)院。所以使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要點(diǎn)：1．記述自己的個(gè)性特長(zhǎng)及取得的成果：擅長(zhǎng)很多科目，演講和音樂(lè)是自己的特長(zhǎng)，多次獲獎(jiǎng)； 2．說(shuō)明進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的努力方向及設(shè)想等：想在英語(yǔ)方面取得突破，更多與其他國(guó)家的人進(jìn)行交流。

本文對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成本文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。

【一句多譯】

1.而且，我曾經(jīng)贏得在我市舉行的演講比賽的第一名，因?yàn)榻艹霰憩F(xiàn)被授予最佳辯手。

①What’s more, I once won the first prize in an English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellent performances.

②What’s more, I once won the first prize in an English speech contest held in our city，honored the Best Speaker for my excellent performances.

2. 眾所周知，英語(yǔ)是國(guó)際語(yǔ)言。

①As we all know, English is a universal language.

②It is known to us all that English is a universal language.