Question

【題目】假定你是李華，最近學(xué)校電臺(tái)打算新開播一個(gè)英語欄目，并就欄目的相關(guān)內(nèi)容征集意見。請(qǐng)你給校電臺(tái)寫一封信，提出自己的建議，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 期望播出的欄目內(nèi)容及原因；

2. 提議欄目名稱及播出時(shí)段；

3. 其他建議。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours.

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m very happy to hear that a new English programme will be broadcast by our school TV station. I am crazy about English, and I do hope to know more about English culture. Many students around me also have the same idea. So 1 think the programme can introduce culture of English speaking countries, such as the US, the UK, Australia or Canada.

I’d prefer it if the programme could be named as English around the world. What’s more, I think it can be broadcast from 5:30 to 6:00 p.m. every day, because most students are free during that time, when some students may play sports, and some may watch the programme.

Besides, it will be popular to play some English songs, which can help to develop students’ interests. I’m sure we will benefit a lot from the programme.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封信，就學(xué)校新開播的英語欄目，提出自己的建議。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 提出建議。

2. 具體內(nèi)容：1）期望播出的欄目內(nèi)容及原因；2）提議欄目名稱及播出時(shí)段；3）其他建議。

第二步: 列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）

be crazy about; such as; what’s more; develop students’ interests; benefit from

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m very happy to hear that a new English programme will be broadcast by our school TV station.

2. I am crazy about English, and I do hope to know more about English culture.

3. Many students around me also have the same idea.

4. I think the programme can introduce culture of English speaking countries, such as the US, the UK, Australia or Canada.

5. I’d prefer it if the programme could be named as English around the world.

6. I think it can be broadcast from 5:30 to 6:00 p.m. every day, because most students are free during that time, when some students may play sports, and some may watch the programme.

7. It will be popular to play some English songs, which can help to develop students’ interests.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改