【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

隨著高考的臨近，最近部分高三學(xué)生選擇在家復(fù)習(xí)而不來(lái)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。假定你是李華，你的朋友Tom在美國(guó)一所中學(xué)就讀，你給他去信探討這一現(xiàn)象，信的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1.闡述這種現(xiàn)象；

2.表達(dá)你對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的觀點(diǎn)及理由；

3.詢問(wèn)美國(guó)是否有類似的情況。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。

3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已給出。

Dear Tom,

I’m writing to discuss with you a phenomenon in our school. ____________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I’m writing to discuss with you a phenomenon in our school. With the college entrance examination approaching, a small number of students prefer to study on their own rather than attend regular classes in school. Personally, I prefer to sit in the bright classroom for revision lessons. The following reasons may account for my view on it.

To begin with, school revision is systematically organized by our teachers, which is sure to improve our learning efficiency. In addition, with other classmates around, we won’t feel it tiresome to revise what have learnt. Furthermore, our teachers are always available whenever we need their help for our academic problems.

What do you think of the phenomenon? By the way, I wonder whether there is something similar in the USA. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：書(shū)信方面的英語(yǔ)作文是高考中英語(yǔ)作文的�？純�(nèi)容。書(shū)寫的時(shí)候要注意以下事項(xiàng)：

1. 稱呼的使用，如：Dear Mr或Dear Mrs等等。如果已給出姓氏的話，則需要將姓氏加上，如：Dear Mr Smith或Dear Mrs Smith等等。如果不知道對(duì)方的姓氏時(shí)，也可以直接這樣書(shū)寫稱呼：Dear Sir或Dear Madam。

2. 正文的書(shū)寫。書(shū)寫正文時(shí)一定要注意：一、將文中所給的要點(diǎn)一一寫清，不要有遺漏。例如本文中給出的要點(diǎn)：1. 最近部分高三學(xué)生選擇在家復(fù)習(xí)而不來(lái)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。2. 表達(dá)你對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的觀點(diǎn)及理由；3. 詢問(wèn)美國(guó)是否有類似的情況。二、語(yǔ)言要通順流暢，避免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，做到文中語(yǔ)意清楚。三、可適當(dāng)增加一些細(xì)節(jié)，以使表達(dá)更加清楚、明白。四、注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的使用。在書(shū)信中一般較多地使用第一人稱，當(dāng)然也會(huì)用到第二和第三人稱。時(shí)態(tài)通常以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)或一般將來(lái)時(shí)還有現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)為主。當(dāng)然我們也可以使用一些情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，包括一些高級(jí)詞匯或句式來(lái)為自己的作文增加得分。

3. 書(shū)信結(jié)尾的時(shí)候要有Yours或Your sincerely這樣的正文的落款，在下一行加上寫信人名字。如果稱呼和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出的話，就無(wú)需關(guān)注了。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本作文層次分明，運(yùn)用了一些高級(jí)詞匯和從句及復(fù)雜的句子。如To begin with，Personally, In addition, Furthermore, By the way還有定語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句和名詞性從句等使得文章緊湊。To begin with, school revision is systematically organized by our teachers, which is sure to improve our learning efficiency.使用了包含which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。用Furthermore, our teachers are always available whenever we need their help for our academic problems.進(jìn)一步闡明了自己的觀點(diǎn)。

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