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15．假設(shè)你是李津．你校英語(yǔ)�？�正在舉辦"E-books or Paper Books"的征文，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)談一下你對(duì)此的看法．
短文應(yīng)包含以下要點(diǎn)：
1．電子書(shū)的優(yōu)勢(shì)（如便宜，容易攜帶，節(jié)省空間等）；
2．紙質(zhì)書(shū)的優(yōu)勢(shì)（如對(duì)眼睛傷害較少）；
3．談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />注意：
1．詞數(shù)：不少于100；
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫：
3．文章開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between…There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between e-books or paper books．
（高分句型一） Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books，one of which is its cheapness．Most e-books are much cheaper compared with paper books．Besides，they take up little space compared with paper books．（電子書(shū)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）
Others don't agree with them．They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes，while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them．（電子書(shū)的缺點(diǎn)）
However，as a student without too much pocket money，I prefer to read e-books．（高分句型二）What's more，my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time．Therefore I would rather choose e-books at the cost of reading comfortableness．（我的看法）．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，你校英語(yǔ)�？�正在舉辦"E-books or Paper Books"的征文，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)談一下你對(duì)此的看法本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意要適當(dāng)拓展，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化．
（高分句型一） Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books，one of which is its cheapness．
該句使用that引導(dǎo)同位語(yǔ)從句，作為view的內(nèi)容；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．
高分句型二）What's more，my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time．
so…that…如此以至于，句意為我的日程安排如此緊張以至于選擇電子書(shū)節(jié)省很多時(shí)間．
高級(jí)詞匯：advantage優(yōu)點(diǎn)；compared with與…相比；take up占據(jù)；would rather寧愿．

解答 There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between e-books or paper books． 
        Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books，one of which is its cheapness．（高分句型一）Most e-books are much cheaper compared with paper books．Besides，they take up little space compared with paper books．（電子書(shū)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）
       Others don't agree with them．They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes，while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them．（電子書(shū)的缺點(diǎn)）
       However，as a student without too much pocket money，I prefer to read e-books．What's more，my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time．（高分句型二）Therefore I would rather choose e-books at the cost of reading comfortableness．（我的看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．