Question

基礎寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）

【寫作情景】

最近的一份調(diào)查表明中國青少年的體質(zhì)明顯下降，青少年的健康問題日益受到社會的關(guān)注。請根據(jù)下列提示，以“The health of Chinese youngsters—a big concern”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1．現(xiàn)狀：青少年體質(zhì)明顯下降，有許多諸如肥胖、近視等健康問題；

2．原因：作業(yè)負擔過重，睡眠不足，缺乏鍛煉；

3．建議：改革現(xiàn)行教育制度，減輕學生負擔，使學生有更多睡眠和鍛煉的時間。

【寫作要求】

用五句話表達全部的內(nèi)容，并組成一篇連貫的短文。（開頭已給出，不計入句數(shù)。）

【評分標準】

句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

【參考詞匯】肥胖 obesity  近視short-sightedness  改革 reform

The health of Chinese youngsters—a big concern

A latest survey shows that the health of Chinese youngsters has greatly declined．_____________

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Answer 1

The health of Chinese youngsters—a big concern

A latest survey shows that the health of Chinese youngsters has greatly declined．Many Chinese students are facing a number of physical problems, such as obesity, and short-sightedness, etc. Under the current educational system, marks seem to mean everything to students so students have to spend most of their time in doing endless homework in order to pass the college entrance examination．As a result, they do not sleep or exercise enough．

To improve students’ health, we should reform the current educational system．Besides, we call for less homework, thus leaving students more time to sleep and take exercise and only in this way can the health of youngsters be greatly improved．

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