Question

最近的一項調(diào)查表明如今的中國青年的人生目標比過去要顯得多元化。這種選擇的變化表明社會在進步，人們的生活目標較以前更為實際。

比例	目標	手段
53.5%	掙錢給自己買一房一車	71.9%的人說將努力拼搏以實現(xiàn)人生的目標
44%	提高生活質(zhì)量
43.7%	成為富人
23.9%	找一份好工作

【參考詞匯】  多元化（的）：diversified    調(diào)查對象：respondent
【寫作要求】
1. 以上述信息為材料寫一段短文。可以根據(jù)實際適當發(fā)揮；
2. 中心突出，語意連貫，層次清晰．書寫規(guī)范；
3. 不少于100字，
4. 標題不計入字數(shù)。

Answer 1

One possible version：
Chinese Young People's Life Goals Today
A recent survey shows that in today's society, Chinese young people's life goals have become more diversified than before. When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves. In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be a rich person while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job. As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams. The survey shows that the society is making progress and people's life goals have become more practical.

試題分析：本文要求根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容寫一篇作文。在寫作前同學們要仔細分析圖表，根據(jù)圖表所示，文章要寫明人們四種不同的目標以及所占的比例和實現(xiàn)目標的途徑手段。在寫調(diào)查報告時一般首先寫明調(diào)查的結(jié)果，然后再詳細介紹各種不同的情況，最后寫明這種現(xiàn)象所反映的問題，即：這種選擇的變化表明社會在進步，人們的生活目標較以前更為實際。此外，反應社會現(xiàn)象的調(diào)查報告一般使用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，而且要客觀真實地反映圖表所給信息。最后，還要注意語言的流暢通順，要適當發(fā)揮想象，補充文章細節(jié)以使文章內(nèi)容豐滿。
【亮點說明】文章總共分為三個層次，首先開門見山提出調(diào)查結(jié)果Chinese young people's life goals have become more diversified than before，然后介紹了四種不同情況以及各自所占的比例，最后總結(jié)這種變化的實質(zhì)，這使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明。盡管文章短小，但是表達方式卻是一大亮點，比如涵蓋信息量較大的復合句When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.和In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be a rich person while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.這充分顯示了作者語言的把控力。此外In addition to 、As for等短語也有效地連接了上下文，使文章語義連貫，自然流暢。