15.今年從3月1日起,上海全面實施全國最嚴(yán)室內(nèi)禁煙令.按照新規(guī),上海的室內(nèi)公共場所、室內(nèi)工作場所、公共交通工具內(nèi)都將全面禁止吸煙.但是,從實施之日起至今,仍然有很多人違反規(guī)定,請你就此事在微博上發(fā)表評論,內(nèi)容包括:
(1)簡單介紹室內(nèi)禁煙令;
(2)列舉違反規(guī)定的現(xiàn)象;
(3)談?wù)勀銓Υ朔N現(xiàn)象的看法.
注意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右;
(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
(3)開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù).
提示詞:禁煙令smoking ban
According to the strictest smoking ban since March 1st this year,According to the strictest smoking ban since March 1st this year,people in Shanghai are forbidden to smoke in every indoor public place including working offices,any means of transportation,etc.
However,there have been many people violating the ban so far.For example,one day on my way to school in a bus,I saw a middle-aged man smoking,neglecting the warning of the driver completely.
As far as I'm concerned,it is necessary to ban smoking in public places,for smoking can ruin the health of both the smoker and the people around him.Therefore,I want to appeal to the smokers to learn and obey the new rules so that we could have a better public environment.

分析 本文屬于提綱作文,動筆前,一定要認(rèn)真分析要點,理解要點要表達(dá)的含義,不能遺漏要點,跑題偏題.平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累,寫作聯(lián)系以外,還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文,這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
亮點句型一:For example,one day on my way to school in a bus,I saw a middle-aged man smoking,neglecting the warning of the driver completely. 例如,有一天,在我上學(xué)的路上,我看到一個中年男子抽煙,完全無視司機(jī)的警告.本句用了see sb doing結(jié)構(gòu),smoking在句中做the man的賓語補(bǔ)足語,動詞neglect與主語I之間是主謂關(guān)系,neglecting是現(xiàn)在分詞在句中做伴隨狀語.
亮點句型二:Therefore,I want to appeal to the smokers to learn and obey the new rules so that we could have a better public environment.因此,我想呼吁吸煙者學(xué)習(xí)和遵守新規(guī)則,以便我們能有一個更好的公共環(huán)境.a(chǎn)ppeal sb to do sth是"呼吁某人做某事",so that 引導(dǎo)的是目的狀語從句.

解答 According to the strictest smoking ban since March 1st this year,people in Shanghai are forbidden to smoke in every indoor public place including working offices,any means of transportation,etc.【介紹禁令】
However,there have been many people violating the ban so far.For example,one day on my way to school in a bus,I saw a middle-aged man smoking,neglecting the warning of the driver completely.(亮點句型一)【存在現(xiàn)象】
As far as I'm concerned,it is necessary to ban smoking in public places,for smoking can ruin the health of both the smoker and the people around him.Therefore,I want to appeal to the smokers to learn and obey the new rules so that we could have a better public environment.(亮點句型二)【個人觀點】

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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