Question

某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)近期開(kāi)辟專欄，討論學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)際，按以下提示，用英文為該專欄寫(xiě)一篇稿件。
1. 說(shuō)明學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣與學(xué)習(xí)效果之間的關(guān)系；
2. 介紹一種好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣并提出養(yǎng)成該習(xí)慣的建議；
3. 描述自己在學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣方面存在的某個(gè)問(wèn)題并給出改進(jìn)措施。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)120左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.                                                    
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                         
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Answer 1

 
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It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. Good habits contribute to better learning results, so students should develop excellent habits.
Making full use of time is a good habit, which requires one to plan carefully. For example, one should make a specific schedule, including what time to get up, have meals, go to bed and even time for relaxation. Above all, do fix time to study every subject, adjusting it depending on different situations. Every day put down what has been completed and what hasn’t been completed.
As a student, I often waste much time doing nothing as a consequence of having no good habits, especially not being able to plan time properly. I think planning does help one achieve more, so everyone should form this good habit, and try to stick to it.

 
試題分析：提綱作文應(yīng)該按所要求的內(nèi)容來(lái)寫(xiě)，根據(jù)所列的內(nèi)容盡量以簡(jiǎn)明扼要的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)。這篇作文要求較靈活，比如自己好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣應(yīng)是能夠提高學(xué)習(xí)效果的，不好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣會(huì)阻礙學(xué)習(xí)的。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞承前啟后，用詞要得體，符合語(yǔ)言環(huán)境。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如Good habits contribute to better learning results,Making full use of time is a good habit,waste much time doing nothing還運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句which requires one to plan carefully.等。并注意了句子的銜接如：so ，F(xiàn)or example, Above all等。
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