Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國筆友打算參加湖南衛(wèi)視舉辦的 “漢語橋”大賽，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語給寫一封信，介紹相關(guān)情況。

主要內(nèi)容：

1. 報名時間：5月31號以前 。

2. 舉辦時間：9月10號 。

3. 參賽人員：非本土漢語使用者。

4. 比賽內(nèi)容：漢語聽、說、讀、寫能力、中國傳統(tǒng)知識文化和技能。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim,

How are you recently?

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

How are you recently? I’m glad to hear that you are going to take part in the contest, Chinese Bridge, which is to be held on September 10th this year. This contest is for non-native Chinese speakers only. The competitors will show their talents in listening, speaking, reading and writing, as well as in traditional Chinese culture and skills, like painting, Chinese Kung fu and the paper cutting.

Be sure to sign up for the contest before the end of May. You still have a lot of time to practice before the contest starts.

I do hope you will get a good result in the competition, Good luck!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封信給美國朋友Jim，給打算參加“漢語橋”大賽的Jim介紹比賽的相關(guān)事項（報名時間、舉辦時間、參賽人員和比賽內(nèi)容）。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 報名時間；

2. 舉辦時間；

3. 參賽人員；

4. 比賽內(nèi)容。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

I’m glad to hear that +從句；take part in；non-native Chinese speakers；as well as；traditional Chinese culture and skills；sign up

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m glad to hear that you are going to take part in the contest,

2. This contest is for non-native Chinese speakers only.

3. The competitors will show their talents in listening, speaking, reading and writing, as well as in traditional Chinese culture and skills,

4. Be sure to sign up for the contest before the end of May.

(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。）

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表換一種方式表達(dá)：In other words, that is to say,

6.表進行舉例說明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表 陳 述 事 實：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表選擇：either…or…，or

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改