Question

假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以“老人摔倒你會(huì)扶嗎？”為主題的班會(huì)調(diào)查結(jié)果及你自已的意見給《英語周報(bào)》寫一篇演講稿，要點(diǎn)如下：

注意：

1.總詞數(shù)不少于100；2.開頭部分已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Will you help the old when he/she falls down on the street? A recent survey from our class meeting shows that______________________________________________

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Answer 1

Ladies and gentlemen,

Will you help the old when he/she falls down on the street？A recent survey from our class meeting shows that eighty percent of the students think they are sure to help the old fallen down on the street because saving life is first things first. Fifteen percent of the students say whether they help or not depends on the circumstances. However, five percent hold the view that the old shouldn’t be helped. Why not? First, they lack the knowledge of first aid, not knowing how to deal with the situation. Second, they are afraid of getting into trouble.

In my opinion, we should help each other, especially the old people. Please remember “respect the old” is one of our best traditions. Everyone will become old, and if such a case occurs to us one day when we’re old, I will say I do need your help. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱短文，話題為：“老人摔倒你會(huì)扶嗎？”同時(shí)這也是一篇議論文，使用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要點(diǎn)：1.部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為應(yīng)該去扶，因?yàn)榫人婪鰝�是中華美德。2.部分人認(rèn)為不能扶，因?yàn)槲覀內(nèi)狈�急救知識(shí)，反而會(huì)帶來更大的問題。而且有些人因?yàn)榉鋈硕�被額訛詐。3.個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：應(yīng)該去扶摔倒的老人。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文的亮點(diǎn)在于連接詞的使用，讓整個(gè)文章成為了一個(gè)有機(jī)的整體。如However、Why not? First、Second、In my opinion 等等；同時(shí)句中還有一些高級(jí)的句式，如such a case occurs to us one day when we’re old中的定語從句when we’re old。在以后的寫作中一定要注意這些技巧的使用。

考點(diǎn)：考察提綱短文