Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；

2.騎自行車的益處，如環(huán)保、對健康有益等。

注意:1.詞數(shù)：100左右

2.演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：低碳生活：low-carbon life 節(jié)能：energy saving

Good morning, everyone,

I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. I feel it an honor to communicate my idea to you. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.

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Answer 1

【答案】Good morning, everyone!

I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. I feel it an honor to communicate my idea to you. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.

As is known to all, air pollution is getting more and more serious recently and as a result, many people are suffering from lung diseases. What’s more, the traffic condition is getting worse and worse day by day, on account of the popularity of cars. So, it is right time that we should lead a low-carbon life

We ought to ride bicycles, for not only can it save energy but also it reminds us to raise awareness of environmental protection.There is no denying that regular exercise and fresh air contribute to good health. Moreover, riding bicycles provides us with a perfect opportunity to strengthen our body and keep up high spirits

Every little step can make a difference to society. Let’s ride bicycles. I’m convinced that our world will become more beautiful.

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；2.騎自行車的益處，如環(huán)保、對健康有益等。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：low-carbon life (低碳生活)；energy saving (節(jié)能)；as a result (結(jié)果)；on account of (由于)；strengthen(加強)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。