Question

11．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．
文中共有10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞：
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Recently I have started a new job in a small office，which four of us share a water filter（凈水器）．One of my coworker complained the water tasted"dirty"，and she is astonished I could drink the water with any trouble．I even started to doubt my taste buds，but the water really tastes fine．Finally，she figured out the problem was actually my cup，which she simply forgot to clean．
I can't help but to think about the world we live in．Too often we quickly blame other people，other things，something else but ourselves．The world isn't perfect，I know，but I think we should take the step back sometimes and ask ourselves some tough questions．Can I be better？Is my heart really pure？…
    Please clean your cup．Because when you do，the water will taste much good．I promise you this．

Answer 1

分析 最近我找了份新工作，是在一間小辦公室里，我們四個(gè)人共用一個(gè)冰箱．冰箱里有一個(gè)Brita牌濾水壺，有一個(gè)同事抱怨說(shuō)水喝起來(lái)感覺(jué)很"臟"，她連續(xù)抱怨了幾天，還很震驚我喝這樣的水竟然沒(méi)事．我開(kāi)始懷疑自己的味蕾出問(wèn)題了，但我真覺(jué)著水喝著還不錯(cuò)．最后，她發(fā)現(xiàn)問(wèn)題出在了她的杯子上，她只是忘了刷杯子，過(guò)一段時(shí)間就影響里面水的味道了．她把杯子洗干凈了，水就沒(méi)有異味了．我禁不住思考了我們生活的世界，我們總是急于責(zé)備其他人、其他事、除了自己之外的一切東西．我知道世界并不完美，但我認(rèn)為有時(shí)我們應(yīng)該退一步，問(wèn)自己幾個(gè)很難回答的問(wèn)題．我想告訴你這個(gè)道理：請(qǐng)洗干凈自己的杯子．因?yàn)橹挥心惆驯�子洗干凈了，里面的水味道才�?huì)好，我保證．

解答 Recently I have started a new job in a small office，which four of us share a water filter（凈水器）．One of my coworker complained the water tasted"dirty"，and she is astonished I could drink the water with any trouble．I even started to doubt my taste buds，but the water really tasted fine．Finally，she figured out the problem was actually my cup，which she simply forgot to clean．I can't help but to think about the world we live∧．Too often we quickly blame other
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people，other things，something else but ourselves．The world isn't perfect，I know，but I think we
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should take the step back sometimes and ask ourselves some tough questions．Can I be better？Is my
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heart really pure？…
Please clean your cup．Because when you do，the water will taste much good．I promise you this．
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解析：
1，which-where．考查定語(yǔ)從句的關(guān)系詞．修飾先行詞a small office，引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句four of us share a water filter，做從句的地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)用 where或in which．
2，Coworker-Coworkers．考查名詞．One of 修飾可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)，所以用Coworkers．
3，is-was．考查時(shí)態(tài)．本段講述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事，所以用過(guò)去式was．
4，with-without．考查單詞辨析．本句表示"我喝水沒(méi)有任何問(wèn)題"，所以應(yīng)該用without表示"沒(méi)有"．
5，my-her．考查代詞．從文中可知是她的杯子的問(wèn)題，所以用her．
6，去掉to．考查固定句式．can't help but do 是固定用法，意思是"只能做"，所以去掉to．
7，live后加in．考查介詞．定語(yǔ)從句we live修飾先行詞the world，因?yàn)?live是不及物動(dòng)詞，所以要在live后加in或在world后加where．
，8，something-anything．考查不定代詞．本句表示"除了我們自身的其他的任何事"，所以用anything．something表示"某一件事"．
9，the-a．考查冠詞．本句表示"但我認(rèn)為有時(shí)我們應(yīng)該退一步"，表示"一"應(yīng)該用不定冠詞a．
10，good-better．考查比較級(jí)．用much修飾，表示"水比不洗杯子好喝"用better．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查短文改錯(cuò)．
help的短語(yǔ)
1．can not help doing 情不自禁，忍不住
2．cannot help but do 不得不
3．help sb．out 幫助，幫忙
4．come to one's help 來(lái)幫某人的忙
5．help oneself 隨意取用，自由取食