Question

7．下面短文中有10處錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    2．只允許修改10 處，多者（從第11 處起）不計(jì)分．
Dear Professor Ma，How are you？
I'm glad to write to you．It is nearly two months since you leave our hospital．I'm still worried about your healthy．How are you getting along these days？I think you may be more better now．But you'd better to have a good rest and take good care of you since you are seventy years old．I still remember those days you helped me with my English．Under your help，I've made rapid progresses．However，my English remains very poorly though I have made good use of my spare time．Can you give me some advice？
Looking forward to hear from you soon．
Yours truly，
Li Ping．

Answer 1

分析 馬教授你好嗎？很高興給你寫(xiě)信，你離開(kāi)我們醫(yī)院已經(jīng)快兩個(gè)月了．我仍然擔(dān)心你的健康．最近怎么樣？好多了吧．你最好注意休息，照顧好自己．你已經(jīng)七十歲了，我還記得你幫我學(xué)英語(yǔ)的那些日子．盡管我充分利用空余時(shí)間，但英語(yǔ)還是很差．你能給我些建議嗎？盼望收到你的來(lái)信．

解答 Dear Professor Ma，How are you？
I'm glad to write to you．It is nearly two months since you leave our hospital．
                                                                                      left
I'm still worried about your healthy．How are you getting along these days？
                                          health
I think you may be more better now．But you'd better to have a good rest
                            much                                           去掉
and take good care of you since you are seventy years old．I still remember those days∧
                                yourself                                                                               加when
you helped me with my English．Under your help，I've made rapid progresses．
                                                 With                                           progress
However，my English remains very poorly though I have made good use of my spare time．
                                                     poor
Can you give me some advice？Looking forward to hear from you soon．
                                                                           hearing
Yours truly，
Li Ping．
1．leave改為left．句意表達(dá)的是過(guò)去，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
2．healthy改為health．句中health是作介詞about的賓語(yǔ)，要用名詞形式．
3．more改為much．句中better是比較級(jí)，不能用more來(lái)修飾．
4．to去掉．had better是特殊的情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，后接動(dòng)詞原形．
5．you改為yourself．短語(yǔ)搭配，take care of oneself照顧好自己．
6．加when．句中you helped me with my English是修飾days的一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，從句結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要用關(guān)系副詞來(lái)連接．
7．Under改為With．短語(yǔ)搭配，with one's help在某人的幫助下．
8．progresses改為progress．句中progress是不可數(shù)名詞，不能用復(fù)數(shù)．
9．poorly改為poor．句中remain是系動(dòng)詞，表示仍然，后接形容詞作表語(yǔ)．
10．hear改為hearing．句中l(wèi)ook forward to盼望，to是介詞，后接名詞或動(dòng)名詞．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查學(xué)生的語(yǔ)篇理解和語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力．常考的知識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)）；動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配）；代詞（不定代詞，人稱代詞）；形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)化）；連詞（and，but，or）；冠詞（an，a，the）等．解題時(shí)，要把握好句子結(jié)構(gòu)，以動(dòng)詞為中心．動(dòng)詞和與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤在短文改錯(cuò)中占很大的比例．