Question

6．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中
共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或
修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（/\），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
    Last weekend my sister went to the supermarket to buy some groceries．Three hours ago，with full bags of goods in both hands，she headed for nearby bus stop，tired and hungry．She was waiting for the bus while it began to rain．After what seemed ages，came a bus，crowded of passengers．When it was her turn to getting on the bus，someone said，"Sorry，no more rooms．"Quite disappointed，my sister had to take a taxi．Half way home，however，the taxi broke out．Hardly had he got out of the taxi when a bus passed by．It was empty，but she had been missed it!What an unluckily day!

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要講述了作者的妹妹去超市購物后回家路上的經(jīng)歷．上個周末，作者的妹妹去超市購物，三個小時后，她兩手提滿了袋子，朝著附近的車站去，又累又餓，在她等車的時候，天開始下雨，好像過了很長時間，車終于來了，車上擠滿了乘客．當(dāng)輪到她上車的時候，有人說，"對不起，沒有空間了．"妹妹感到很失望，于是打的，但是半路上出租車拋錨了，妹妹一下車，就有一輛公共汽車經(jīng)過，上面是空的，但可惜的是，有錯過了．

解答 Last weekend my sister went to the supermarket to buy some groceries．Three hours 
 
ago，with full bags of goods in both hands，she headed for/\nearby bus stop，tired and
later                                                                            a/the
hungry．She was waiting for the bus while it began to rain．After what seemed ages，
                                                     when
came a bus，crowded of passengers．When it was her turn to gettingon the bus，
                             with                                                       get
 someone said，"Sorry，no more rooms．"Quite disappointed，my sister had to take a
                                                 room
taxi．Half way home，however，the taxi broke out．Hardly had hegot out of the taxi
                                                                     down                 she
when a bus passed by．It was empty，but she had been missed it!What an unluckily 
                                                                         去掉                            unlucky
day!
1．a(chǎn)go--later 考查副詞．文中表示購物后回家，所以應(yīng)該是三小時之后，應(yīng)該用later．
2．nearby  前面加a/the 考查冠詞．stop是車站的意思，是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)形式，應(yīng)該用冠詞a/the．
3．while--when 考查連詞．表示就在此時，用when，while后面接持續(xù)性動詞．
4．of--with 考查介詞搭配．crowded with是固定搭配．
5．getting--get 考查動詞不定式．It is one's turn to do sth，所以這里應(yīng)該用to get．
6．rooms--room 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．room在文中是"空間"的意思，是不可數(shù)名詞，所以不能用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
7．out--down 考查動詞短語搭配．break down表示拋錨，出故障．
8．he--she 考查人稱代詞．文中講的是妹妹，所以用she．
9．去掉been 考查謂語動詞的語態(tài)．妹妹已經(jīng)錯過了公交車，應(yīng)該是主動關(guān)系，所以用主動語態(tài)，去掉been．
10．unluckily--unlucky 考查形容詞．修飾名詞用形容詞．

點評 改錯題要注意代詞，連詞以及詞性、人稱的轉(zhuǎn)化．
做好短文改錯題，可以從以下三方面去考慮：1．快速閱讀短文，如抓住中心思想，從整體上對短文有個了解． 2．充分運(yùn)用語言的基礎(chǔ)知識，從句型結(jié)構(gòu)、詞的變化、詞類選擇、詞的搭配、習(xí)慣用法出發(fā)，進(jìn)行分析判斷，盡快找出錯誤在何處． 3．重視整體和語境，從上下文關(guān)系中找出表達(dá)連接關(guān)系或邏輯關(guān)系的詞或詞組，判斷是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系還是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，是因果關(guān)系還是讓步關(guān)系．