Question

【題目】我們是寄宿制學(xué)校，大部分學(xué)生住校，也有一部分學(xué)生選擇走讀。我校開展了一次問卷調(diào)查，主題為：“我們是否應(yīng)該住校?”

下表是本次調(diào)查的結(jié)果，請你就此結(jié)果寫一篇調(diào)查報告，并適當(dāng)闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。

70%的同學(xué)贊成住校	30%的同學(xué)反對住校
1．有利于培養(yǎng)我們良好的學(xué)習(xí)和生活習(xí)慣； 2．節(jié)約了時間； 3．可與老師及同學(xué)充分交流，有利于共同進(jìn)步。	1．學(xué)校餐廳無法滿足多樣需求； 2．學(xué)生住校不利于了解外界信息； 3．和家人交流少。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．參考詞匯：寄宿制學(xué)校boarding school住校live on campus；

3．文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)。

Recently, a survey has been made in Our school on whether we students should live on campus in a boarding school．The opinions are divided．

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, a survey has been made in our school on whether we students should live on campus in a boarding school. The opinions are divided.

70% of us are in favor of it as living on campus can help develop a good habit of studying and living. Besides, they can spend less time on the way. to school and home. What's more, they can consult teachers and discuss with classmates, which will contribute to their improvement.

However, 30% of them are against it for the reasons below: First, the school canteen can't meet the various needs of students. Second, if they live on campus, they'll have little chance to get in touch with society. Last, without parents accompanying, they communicate less with them.

Personally, I think it's necessary to live on campus because we can live, study and play together happily.

【解析】試題分析：本文要求根據(jù)以主題為：“我們是否應(yīng)該住校?”的問卷調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇調(diào)查報告，并適當(dāng)闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。首先要讀懂題意。然后在寫作時要將正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，最后在此基礎(chǔ)上，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作時根據(jù)所給提綱，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一篇調(diào)查報告，正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，并有自己的觀點(diǎn)。句子銜接緊密，文章結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級句子。70% of us are in favor of it as living on campus can help develop a good habit of studying and living.句中as引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；they can consult teachers and discuss with classmates, which will contribute to their improvement.句中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；if they live on campus, they'll have little chance to get in touch with society.if條件句使用巧妙；另外，Besides, What's more, However, First, Last, Personally,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。