Question

【題目】下面是你今天前往機(jī)場(chǎng)接一位朋友的經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)日記。

要點(diǎn)提示：

1.下午2:00離開(kāi)家，朋友的飛機(jī)是3:40到；

2.由于遇到沙塵暴，能見(jiàn)度降低,在環(huán)城路上遭遇堵車(chē)，耽誤了20分鐘；

3.在3:30趕到機(jī)場(chǎng)，接到朋友。

參考詞匯： 1. 能見(jiàn)度visibility 2.降低decrease(v.) 3. 環(huán)城路 the ring road

Saturday, March 16 Fine

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Saturday, March16

Fine

I drove away from home at 2:00 p.m. to meet my friend at the airport,

whose plane was arriving at 3:40 p.m. Unluckily, when I was on the way, I was caught in a sudden sandstorm. Since the visibility was decreased greatly, drivers couldn’t see the road clearly and I was stuck in a traffic jam on the ring road. I was very worried and twenty minutes later, the condition returned to normal and I hurried to the airport as soon as possible. At last, I arrived at the airport and picked up my friend.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇文章要求寫(xiě)一篇日記，根據(jù)提示信息來(lái)寫(xiě)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。本篇可以按照時(shí)間順序來(lái)寫(xiě)。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。to meet my friend at the airport,whose plane was arriving at 3:40 p.m.使用了定語(yǔ)從句。Since the visibility was decreased greatly使用了原因狀語(yǔ)從句。本文還使用了大量短語(yǔ)，如drive away from, stuck in a traffic jam,hurried to, as soon as possible，插入語(yǔ)At last，以及副詞Unluckily的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語(yǔ)言更加連貫。