Question

假如你是中學生李華，你的英國筆友William 信，詢問你提到的“軍訓”是什么意思。請你寫一封回信，向他介紹“軍訓”的情況。內(nèi)容應包括：

（1）時間：兩周；地點：部隊軍營；（2）內(nèi)容：操練、學唱軍歌、行軍等；

（3）目的：...... （內(nèi)容自擬）；（4）感受：印象深刻；影響深遠。

注意（1）詞數(shù)不少于80;（2）書信格式及開頭均已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

參考詞語：軍訓 military training 軍營 camp

Dear William,

How are you going? I’m writing to explain to you what military training is.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear William,

How are you going? I’m writing to explain to you what military training is.

We middle school students usually go to camps to take military training, which lasts about two weeks. We have to practice some simple military movements. In addition, we are taught to sing songs which are very encouraging. What impresses me most is the long march, which sometimes covers as far as ten kilometers.

Military training is meant to teach us how to cooperate and act as a whole. Meanwhile, good qualities such as selflessness, dedication and perseverance can be cultivated and fear conquered．In short, military training leaves me a deep impression and influences me profoundly, which is far beyond my imagination.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題解析：這是一篇書信寫作。主要向你的筆友介紹一下軍訓，題目已經(jīng)給定大致內(nèi)容，寫作時要注意適當增加內(nèi)容，以保證文章的連貫性。注意預言貼切禮貌。

【亮點說明】第一段第二句I’m writing to explain to you what military training is.就是用了what引導的賓語從句，十分貼切到位，一句話表明了寫信的目的。第二段第一句和第三句使用了which引導的定語從句。第二段第四句“What impresses me most is the long march, which sometimes covers as far as ten kilometers.”不緊使用了what引導的主語從句，而且還使用了which的一種特殊用法，即which引導從句修飾前面整個主句，文章最后一句In short, military training leaves me a deep impression and influences me profoundly, which is far beyond my imagination.也使用了這種句式，顯示出了作者深厚的語言功底。in addition，as far as，as a whole，in short，leave sb a deep impression等短語的使用，也使得文章更加生動�？偨Y(jié)：寫作時多使用連詞，短語和不同，句式。

考點：考查書信寫作。