Question

17．中學生英語報社正開展一場題為"Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you
prefer？"的討論活動．請你依據(jù)下面表格所提供的要點寫一篇短文，向該報社投稿．
老年教師：教學耐心．講解細致．經(jīng)驗豐富
青年教師：精力充沛．教學活潑．勇于創(chuàng)新
你的觀點？
注意：1．詞數(shù)150左右．開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總數(shù)．
Opinions are divided on this question．_________________________________________
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Answer 1

分析 中學生英語報社正開展一場題為"Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer？"的討論活動．根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容：老年教師，教學耐心．講解細致．經(jīng)驗豐富；青年教師，精力充沛．教學活潑．勇于創(chuàng)新．最后一定不要忘記講述自己的觀點，簡述一下原因．寫作時，不要單純地將提示語直譯且羅列出來，注意適當使用并列連詞，使得語句通順，同時也會讓理由充分，更有說服力．
【亮點說明】范文為書面表達三段式，層次分明，一目了然．第一段講述觀點一：有人喜歡老年教師；第二段講述觀點二：有人喜歡老年教師；最后一段談?wù)撟约旱挠^點．文中多處運用連詞，將整篇文章有機銜接起來，如what's more，however，in addition，besides等．注意一些講述觀點的短語或句型：opinions are divided..，in their views，as for me，I prefer…等．文中最后一段Besides，most young teachers are willing to devote themselves to their work，which without doubt is beneficial to us students．此處用到非限制性定語從句，which指代前面一句話，表明大多數(shù)年輕老師愿意全身心投入工作，毫無疑問，對我們學生是有利的，有力地支撐了自己的觀點．
Some students like elderly teachers'teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience．（高分句型一）
In addition，they are more ready to accept or create new ideas，including teaching．（高分句型二）
As for me，I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers，for we students have much in common with young teachers．（高分句型三） 
Besides，most young teachers are willing to devote themselves to their work，which without doubt is beneficial to us students．（高分句型四）

解答 Opinions are divided on this question．Some students like elderly teachers'teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience．（高分句型一）What's more，elderly teachers tend to be more patient and careful with explanations．
       Some students，however，prefer to be taught by young teachers．In their views，young teachers are more energetic and enthusiastic．Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting．In addition，they are more ready to accept or create new ideas，including teaching．（高分句型二）
       As for me，I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers，for we students have much in common with young teachers．（高分句型三） They are our friends as well as teachers．Besides，most young teachers are willing to devote themselves to their work，which without doubt is beneficial to us students．（高分句型四）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．