Question

17．目前出國旅游很熱門，假設你是某高中學生李華，你的朋友Lily計劃假期出國旅游，希望你能給予她一些建議．請你用英語寫一篇電子郵件回復她．
要點如下：
1．旅游中出現(xiàn)的一些不文明現(xiàn)象．
2．你的建議．
注意1．詞數(shù)在100左右，
2．可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：吐痰 spit；樹立形象 uphold an image．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）As we know，with more and more Chinese going on overseas trips，some of them shout loudly，litter or spit in public，which has done great harm to our good reputation．
該句使用了兩個定語從句，第一個as引導非限制性定語從句；第二個which引導非限制性定語從句，修飾整個句子；
（高分句型二）Finally，you should always keep in mind that it is everyone's responsibility to unhold image of our motherland or spit in public，which has done great harm to our good reputation．
that引導賓語從句，在賓語從句中還使用了 It is 名詞 to do的句型；此外還有which引導定語從句；
高級詞匯：do great harm to對…造成傷害； keep in mind 牢記；responsibility責任；
連接過渡詞：to begin with首先；What's more表示遞進；

解答 Dear lily，
   I am so glad to receive your letter telling me you will go on an overseas trip，here are my suggestions．
   （高分句型一）As we know，with more and more Chinese going on overseas trips，some of them shout loudly，litter or spit in public，which has done great harm to our good reputation．（列舉旅游中不文明現(xiàn)象）Therefore，to begin with，（建議一）you have to understand and respect foreign cultures，so as to get along well．And before you start your overseas trip，（建議二）remember to learn about the culture and custom there．What's more，（建議三）wherever you go you need to protect the enviroment．In this way，you'll win respect for yourself as well as our country．（高分句型二）Finally，you should always keep in mind that it is everyone's responsibility to unhold image of our motherland．
    I do wish you have a good time!
Yours friend
Lihua

點評 提綱作文實際上是對考生的思路以及文章的寫作范圍給出了明確的限定，因此考生在寫作時，應在保證內(nèi)容要點齊全的同時進行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮；要根據(jù)提綱全面構(gòu)思文章內(nèi)容，根據(jù)內(nèi)容構(gòu)思詞語和句型結(jié)構(gòu)；注意句子的時態(tài)，詞語的豐富和句型的多樣性．