Question

【題目】假定你是李華,寒假在多倫多學習,從下圖海報得知當?shù)匾粋�普通話冬令營正在招募志愿者. 請寫一封信申請做志愿者,內(nèi)容包括：

1. 寫信目的；

2. 個人優(yōu)勢；

3. 你的期待.

注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù).

Dear Sir/Madam：

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm Li Hua, a high school student from China. Knowing that some volunteers are needed for your Mandarin winter camp, I'm so excited and writing to recommend myself.

Firstly, coming from China gives me an advantage over other applicants. Secondly, I'm outgoing and have positive team spirit, which will help me work better with other staff members. What's more, I'm patient and helpful, and able to get along well with children. Most importantly, now I'm in Toronto, thus making it convenient for me to be devoted to voluntary work. I also expect to experience different cultures and learn more about the local life.

I'd appreciate it if you could give me a chance. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇申請信。內(nèi)容要求你根據(jù)海報內(nèi)容寫一封申請信，表明自己想做志愿者。

根據(jù)寫作要求看，這是一個應用文寫作，結(jié)合海報要求，寫一封申請信，申請做志愿者。通過審題，可知這篇作文需要使用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時進行寫作。寫作要求已給出：1. 寫信目的；2. 個人優(yōu)勢；3. 你的期待。屬于提綱性作文。寫作時需注意：一是內(nèi)容要結(jié)合海報上的要求來寫；二是要詳略得當,本文要點已經(jīng)給出，結(jié)合要點可知，對個人申請做志愿者的優(yōu)勢要重點去描述，個人期待可以簡寫。三要注意適當?shù)卦黾蛹毠?jié),個人優(yōu)勢的描述要有代表性述，展開的內(nèi)容要和主題有關系，切勿天馬行空，胡亂發(fā)展；四要恰當?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞,以使行文連貫。最后在寫作時要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用。