Question

6．假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack 來信詢問你校開展的"光盤行動"（Clear Your Plate Campaign）的有關(guān)事宜．請根據(jù)提示給他寫一封回信．內(nèi)容包括：
1．"光盤行動"的目的；
2．"光盤行動"后學(xué)生的變化；
3．你的體會．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100 左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jack，
I am writing to tell you something about the activity Clear Your Plate Campaign you referred to in your last letter．
                                               
I'm looking forward to having your opinions of the campaign．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息美國朋友Jack 來信詢問你校開展的"光盤行動"（Clear Your Plate Campaign）的有關(guān)事宜．請根據(jù)提示給他寫一封回信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點："光盤行動"的目的；"光盤行動"后學(xué)生的變化；你的體會． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Before the campaign，many students，unaware of their wasting of food，bought much more than they could eat這句話中用到了插入語的句式，插入了"unaware of their wasting of food"用來修飾students；knowing the significance of saving food after the campaign，more and more students are beginning to buy a proper amount of food for their meals，這句話中用到了動名詞作主語的結(jié)構(gòu)，動詞know和students之間構(gòu)成主動關(guān)系，用到"knowing the significance of saving food after the campaign"；等等有特色的句子．而且多次用到了很亮采的短語和詞匯，如：unaware of，it is essential to，looking forward to，等等．都是具有一定的參考價值的，文章結(jié)構(gòu)鮮明，而且用詞新穎，格式整齊．

解答 Dear Jack，
       I am writing to tell you something about the activity Clear Your Plate Campaign you referred to in your last letter．
       Clear Your Plate Campaignis intended to reduce food waste and help students realize how important it is to save food．（高分句型一）Before the campaign，many students，unaware of their wasting of food，bought much more than they could eat and even threw the leftovers without a second thought．（高分句型二）But encouragingly，knowing the significance of saving food after the campaign，more and more students are beginning to buy a proper amount of food for their meals．（高分句型三）
       Personally，it is of great benefit to join in the campaign and form a good habit of clearing the plate．And it is essential to start with ourselves and start from now．Don't you think so？
       I'm looking forward to having your opinions of the campaign．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．