Question

【題目】假如你是李華。你的美國朋友Alex來信說，考試臨近時，他總會感到焦慮。請你給他回信。內(nèi)容：

1.向Alex表示問候和安慰。

2.提出建議。（至少兩點）

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Alex,

I’m sorry to hear that you feel anxious before exams, which is actually quite nutural among students. But this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.

Above all, you should keep a good state of mind. That is to say, you need to have confidence in yourself and look at everything positively. Additionally, it is advisable for you to listen to music, take exercise and communicate with your friends, which helps to get rid of pressure. Last but not least, what really matters is to keep trying and never give up.

I hope you will find these ideas useful.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封信，向美國朋友提出針對考試焦慮的建議。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結構：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 表示問候和安慰

2. 給出建議

1）培養(yǎng)自信

2）尋求一些減壓方法

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

be anxious about；exam；suggestion；change；develop confidence；get rid of；useful；take one’s advice；look forward to

第三步：連詞成句

1. But this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.

2.Above all, you should keep a good state of mind.

3.That is to say, you need to have confidence in yourself and look at everything positively.

4. Additionally, it is advisable for you to listen to music, take exercise and communicate with your friends, which helps to get rid of pressure.

5.Last but not least, what really matters is to keep trying and never give up.

根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改