Question

17．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩赴，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)∧，并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞．
  2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
More than one American child dislike getting advice from members of their family．They turn to"strangers"．When they need advice，they don't usually go to people they know．Instead many of them wrote letters to newspapers and magazine that give advice in many different subjects included family problems，the use of language，health，cooking，child care，clothes，and even in how to buy a house or a car．Most newspapers regular print letters from readers with problems．Along with letters there are answers written by people who are supposed to know what to solve so difficult problems．Some of these writers are doctors，and others are lawyers or educators．And two of the most famous writers of advice are women without special training for this kind of work．

Answer 1

分析 很多美國(guó)人都不愿意向家人尋求意見．有問題他們更喜歡寫信給報(bào)社和雜志社，詢問很多方面的問題．報(bào)社會(huì)把這些信件登出來，附上知道怎么解決這些問題的專業(yè)人士的意見．但讓人意外的是：最有名的解決問題的卻是兩位沒受過什么特殊培訓(xùn)的普通女士．

解答 More than one American child dislike getting advice from members of their family．They turn to
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"strangers"．When they need advice，they don't usually go to people they know．Instead many of
           
them wrote letters to newspapers and magazine that give advice in many different subjects 
        write                                        magazines                      on
included family problems，the use of language，health，cooking，child care，clothes，and even on
including         
how to buy a house or a car．Most newspapers regular print letters from readers with problems．
                                                                     regularly
Along with∧letters there are answers written by people who are supposed to know what to solve 
               加the                                                                                                    how
so difficult problems．Some of these writers are doctors，and others are lawyers or educators．And
such                                                                                                                                    But
two of the most famous writers of advice are women without special training for this kind of work．
1．dislike改為dislikes．題干more than one表示許多的意思，但謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要遵循語(yǔ)法一致原則，和one保持一致，用單數(shù)．
2．wrote改為write．文章講述的是一般事實(shí)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
3．magazine改為magazines．句意表達(dá)的是和newspapers并列的雜志社，要用復(fù)數(shù)名詞．
4．in改為on．表達(dá)某方面的內(nèi)容，要用介詞on．
5．include改為including．題干中that give advice on many different subjects是一個(gè)完整的定語(yǔ)從句，include要用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式；包括的內(nèi)容中后面，要用現(xiàn)在分詞．
6．regular改為regularly．題干中是用來修飾動(dòng)詞print印刷，要用副詞．
7．加the．句意表示的是特指前面提到的letters，要用定冠詞．
8．what改為how．動(dòng)詞不等式to solve such difficult problems是完整盡管，要用特殊疑問副詞構(gòu)成復(fù)合不等式短語(yǔ)．
9．so改為such．problems是名詞，要用such修飾，so修飾形容詞或副詞．
10．And改為But．句意表達(dá)的是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．