Question

14．4.23日是世界讀書日，書籍象征著知識與力量．然而隨著社會的發(fā)展，越來越多的娛樂活動代替閱讀被用來消磨時間．請你以"The Importance of Reading"為題，寫一篇短文，宣傳閱讀的重 要性．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；
      2．可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
      3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
The importance of reading
    As the development of the world，there is more and more entertainment for people to kill time．However，_______________．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放作文，根據(jù)提示信息以"The Importance of Reading"為題，寫一篇短文，宣傳閱讀的重 要性，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：書籍象征著知識與力量．然而隨著社會的發(fā)展，越來越多的娛樂活動代替閱讀被用來消磨時間 2、要在合理的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：When we read books，we have the opportunity to know great people，to learn history and to enrich our knowledge about science，culture，economic and so on．（高分句型一）運(yùn)用不定式to learn history and to enrich our knowledge about science，culture，economic and so on表示目的
    Reading has so many advantages that we can find lots of benefits through reading．（高分句型二）運(yùn)用so…that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句

解答 The importance of reading
    As the development of the world，there is more and more entertainment for people to kill time．However，Reading can brings us both knowledge and entertainment．Therefore，I think reading is very important．The reasons are as following．
    Just as Goethe put it，"Reading a good book is just like having a conversation with a noble man．"Reading plays an essential role in our life．Reading can broaden our horizon．When we read books，we have the opportunity to know great people，to learn history and to enrich our knowledge about science，culture，economic and so on．（高分句型一）
    Besides，reading can cultivate our taste．we all know that the more knowledge a person has，the better-behaved he will be．I think this is the charming of reading．If there are more people like reading，the world will become more civilized．
    Reading has so many advantages that we can find lots of benefits through reading．（高分句型二）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．