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12．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)2015屆高三（1）班學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，為�？�"英語(yǔ)園地"寫(xiě)一篇短文，記述你和家人歡度元宵節(jié)（the Lantern Festival）的過(guò)程．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于60.2．短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．
提示詞：湯圓sweet dumpling；燈籠lantern
The Lantern Festival of this year fell on March 5^th．20．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇記敘文，讓我們寫(xiě)一篇根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，為�？�"英語(yǔ)園地"寫(xiě)一篇短文，記述你和家人歡度元宵節(jié)（the Lantern Festival）的過(guò)程．寫(xiě)作時(shí)用第一人稱(chēng)，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：圖片故事敘述作文要求把握故事脈絡(luò)并把每幅圖的重要細(xì)節(jié)表述清楚．
1．注意故事的鏈接框架，例如"Last Tuesday…First…Then…Finally…"
2．注意圖片主要細(xì)節(jié)．圖一，我和爺爺奶奶包湯圓，爸爸媽媽煮湯圓．圖二，全家人一起晚餐．圖三，全家人觀賞元宵燈會(huì)．圖四，全家人觀賞滿(mǎn)月．
3．注意總結(jié)全文．如我希望明年元宵節(jié)繼續(xù)進(jìn)行這樣的活動(dòng)，"I hope we can continue these activities on the next Lantern Festival!"
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句：
1．fall on 適逢（某日），正當(dāng)（某日）．
2．in the preparation of 為…做準(zhǔn)備．
3．Then came the grandest dinner time．然后是偉大的晚餐時(shí)間到了．副詞放在句首，句子要全部倒裝．表示對(duì)晚餐是多少的盼望．
4．we couldn't help flashing our cameras．我們情不自禁的照相．couldn't help+doing是情不自禁的做么事的意思．
5．Walking in the park and admiring the beautiful moon，we felt we were so lucky to have each other as a family． 走在公園里和享受著美麗的月亮，我們覺(jué)得我們是如此幸運(yùn)能有彼此這樣一個(gè)家庭．Walking 分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)，這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)是提分的．Walk與后面的主語(yǔ)we是主動(dòng)的關(guān)系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞．
6．What a fantastic lantern festival!多么美妙的元宵節(jié)！What引導(dǎo)的感嘆句結(jié)尾，what_不定冠詞+形容詞+主語(yǔ)�。�

解答 The Lantern Festival of this year fell on March 5th．On that day after school，I hurried back home to join in the preparation of the big family feast．（介紹元宵節(jié)以及為此做準(zhǔn)備）Grandparents taught me how to make sweet dumplings while Dad and Mom made dishes．Then came the grandest dinner time．We all agreed that homemade dumplings tasted much sweeter．We chatted happily，enjoying the family togetherness． After the dinner，we went to the park to appreciate the beautiful lanterns，the highlight of this festival．Two huge dragon lanterns especially amazed us and we couldn't help flashing our cameras．Walking in the park and admiring the beautiful moon，we felt we were so lucky to have each other as a family and valued the time we spent together．（介紹元宵節(jié)我們做了哪些事）
          What a fantastic lantern festival!（感想）

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