Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏子符號（∧）并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

For many people, music has always been part of life, and they listen to music on radio, on iPod and on Internet. As is vividly showing in the picture, the music fan is trying to download songs he enjoys. But the website requires payment first every time he wanted to download something, that annoys him. How he wishes the music is all free!

Many people are used to free music being downloaded from the Internet without realizing they have done harm for others’ right. Music artists work very hardly to compose music. If not paid, he will lose enthusiasm to go ahead, and gradually we will find beautiful musics nowhere.

Answer 1

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【解析】考查定冠詞。在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上on the Internet。故加定冠詞the。

考查非謂語動詞。句意：正如圖片展示的…，情景被展示，故使用過去分詞，故將showing改為showed或shown。

考查動詞時態(tài)。文章使用一般現(xiàn)在時描述，故將wanted改為wants。

考查定語從句。非限制性定語從句不能由that引導(dǎo)，只能由which引導(dǎo)。故將that改為which。

考查過去分詞作定語。Downloaded過去分詞作定語，表示被動，故將being去掉。

考查虛擬語氣。與現(xiàn)在事實相反，應(yīng)使用一般過去時，故將is改為were。

考查固定短語。Do harmful to對…有害。故將介詞for改為to。

考查副詞。Hardly幾乎不；hard副詞，努力地。故將hardly改為hard。

考查代詞。句意：如果不支付，他們將失去熱情。此處他們指音樂藝術(shù)家。故將he改為they。

考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。music為不可數(shù)名詞，故將musics改為music。