Question

目前，許多學校對學生采取封閉式管理，學生對此看法不一。請根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，談談自己的看法。(字數(shù)120左右)

有的同學認為	有的同學認為
學校限制我們的自由；學生和社會接觸 少；學生的興趣和愛好不能得到充分的 發(fā)展。因此……	學校是學習知識的地方：學生應該安心 在學校里學習；學生缺乏自覺性，離開了 老師，可能會……
你的看法：

Answer 1

One possible version：

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have different opinions about it. Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have little interest in their studies.

Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence/affect their studies。

Personally I think, it is necessary to keep students at school. But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life.I don’t agree to keep students at school all day. Schools should offer students more free time to develop their personal interests。

【解析】

試題分析：本文為提綱作文�？忌弦�就學校采取封閉式管理為主題寫一篇作文。文章應分為三段，第一段寫反對的同學的看法，第二段寫支持的同學的看法，最后談談自己的看法。在寫觀點的時候，條理一定要清楚，比如用first of all，secondly，besides，what’s more，moreover，last but not least等。寫作時要充分發(fā)揮想象，以使文章內(nèi)容豐滿，并且要達到要求的字數(shù)。此外，還要注意使用多種句式和高級詞匯來提高文章檔次。最后要注意要正確使用連接詞，使文章通順連貫。

【亮點說明】本文最大的亮點是使用了許多亮點詞匯短語和優(yōu)秀句式。亮點詞匯短語如get in touch with，put their heart into，lack the ability，develop等。Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence/affect their studies。本句中Once out of school,使用了狀語從句的省略，that will influence/affect their studies，是一個定語從句，修飾先行詞something。多樣化的句式使文章給人耳目一新的感覺。在以后的作文中，考生要盡量運用多種句式，避免單一，也能給人留下較好的印象。

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