Question

【題目】假如你是李華，為加強舊書的循環(huán)利用，最近你校學生會準備建立面向?qū)W生的“圖書庫”，請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇倡議書，面向高三同學征集舊書。

1. 活動的目的與意義；

2. 號召高三學生參與。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯:圖書庫: book bank

Boys and girls,

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The Student Union

Answer 1

【答案】Boys and girls,

To make better use of the books we have used but no longer need, we’ve planned to set up a book bank. By collecting books and magazines that are in good condition and are of use to those in need, we can recycle them in an effective way, thus avoiding unnecessary waste. Meanwhile, the notes in the books from the book bank can help us learn our lessons more efficiently. What’s equally important is that, by using the recycled books, we can save a lot of money that can be used for other aspects of our school life.

Therefore, it’s vital that we depend on you, Senior Three schoolmates, to make generous donations of your used books and other learning materials, which will definitely serve as shining examples for the students in lower grades.

The Student Union

【解析】

本文書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封倡議書。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇是一篇倡議書：為加強舊書的循環(huán)利用，最近你校學生會準備建立面向?qū)W生的“圖書庫”，請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇倡議書，面向高三同學征集舊書�；顒拥哪康呐c意義；號召高三學生參與。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：book bank（書庫）；By collecting books and magazines（收集書和雜志）；in an effective way（用一種有效的方法）；the recycled books（再回收的書）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)語態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。

【亮點說明】

本文是一封倡議書。重點突出，要點齊全，文章結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級句子。To make better use of the books we have used but no longer need, we’ve planned to set up a book bank.動詞不定式做目的狀語；By collecting books and magazines that are in good condition and are of use to those in need,句中使用that引導(dǎo)的定語從句；thus avoiding unnecessary waste.現(xiàn)在分詞做自然的結(jié)果狀語；What’s equally important is that, by using the recycled books, we can save a lot of money that can be used for other aspects of our school life.句中what引導(dǎo)的主語從句堪稱經(jīng)典；另外，By collecting，in need, more efficiently，Therefore,等的使用也為文章增色添彩。