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16．假定你是李越，你校圖書館最近新設了一個英語閱覽室，很受學生歡迎．請用英語給閱覽室外籍管理老師Peter寫封信．信的主要內容包括：
1．閱覽室給學生帶來的好處（至少兩點）；
2．閱覽室仍需改進的建議（至少兩點）．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
Recently the library of our school has set up an English Reading Room．The reading room，where we students can read English magazines，benefits us a lot．（高分句型一）It is convenient for us to enrich our lives and broaden our minds．What is more important is that it helps develop our interest in studying English．（高分句型二）
Despite the good it has done to us，I'd like to make some suggestions．（高分句型三）Have you considered opening it all weekdays instead of just on Friday afternoon？Besides，the limited number of books available is better to be enlarged．
I hope you will find these suggestions useful and thank you for your time．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Yue．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李越，你校圖書館最近新設了一個英語閱覽室，很受學生歡迎．請用英語給閱覽室外籍管理老師Peter寫封信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：閱覽室給學生帶來的好處（至少兩點）；閱覽室仍需改進的建議（至少兩點）．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：enrich our lives and broaden our minds豐富我們的生活，拓展我們的思想；Despite盡管；make some suggestions建議；Besides另外；
The reading room，where we students can read English magazines，benefits us a lot．（高分句型一）
What is more important is that it helps develop our interest in studying English．（高分句型二）
  Despite the good it has done to us，I'd like to make some suggestions．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       Recently，the library of our school has set up an English Reading Room．The reading room，where we students can read English magazines，benefits us a lot．（高分句型一）It is convenient for us to enrich our lives and broaden our minds．What is more important is that it helps develop our interest in studying English．（高分句型二）
       Despite the good it has done to us，I'd like to make some suggestions．（高分句型三）Have you considered opening it all weekdays instead of just on Friday afternoon？Besides，the limited number of books available is better to be enlarged．
       I hope you will find these suggestions useful and thank you for your time．
       Beat wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Yue

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．