Question

19．假設(shè)你是李華，David是你的美國朋友．他對你所在的城市最近推廣使用公共自行車很感興趣，來信向你詢問此事．請你給他寫一封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下：
1．感謝他的關(guān)注；
 2．簡要分析推廣公共自行車的原因與好處；
 3．談?wù)勀愕母邢耄?br />注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式已經(jīng)為你寫好．
2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：推廣 promotion 公共自行車public bicycles 低碳生活 low-carbon life
Dear David，
I'm glad you've noticed the promotion of public bicycles in our city．Thank you for your concern．
With rapid development of our city in recent years，the number of private cars is on the increase，making the streets more and more crowded．To relieve the traffic pressure，public bicycle service is provided in our city．This makes it more convenient for us to get around and the traffic is no longer as crowded as before．At the same time，it greatly reduces air pollution．Besides，the bicycle riders can get plenty of exercise as well．
I hope that the use of public bicycles will become more and more popular and everyone can live a low-carbon life．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于公共自行車的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一表明書信的話題并且感謝他的關(guān)注；二分析推廣公共自行車的原因與好處；三自己的感想．
高分句型：
1．With rapid development of our city in recent years，the number of private cars is on the increase，making the streets more and more crowded．句子里．With 短語做伴隨狀語，表示"隨著"；making the streets more and more crowded．是必然的結(jié)果狀語．
近年來隨著我們城市的快速發(fā)展，私人汽車的數(shù)量在直線增長，使街道顯得越來越窄．
2．To relieve the traffic pressure，public bicycle service is provided in our city．句子里To relieve the traffic pressure是目的狀語，表示"為了緩解交通壓力"；public bicycle service 表示"公共自行車服務(wù)"．
為了緩解交通壓力，我市提供了公共自行車服務(wù)．

解答 Dear David，
       I'm glad you've noticed the promotion of public bicycles in our city．Thank you for your concern．（表明書信的話題并且感謝他的關(guān)注）
       With rapid development of our city in recent years，the number of private cars is on the increase，making the streets more and more crowded．【高分句型一】To relieve the traffic pressure，public bicycle service is provided in our city．【高分句型二】This makes it more convenient for us to get around and the traffic is no longer as crowded as before．At the same time，it greatly reduces air pollution．Besides，the bicycle riders can get plenty of exercise as well．（分析推廣公共自行車的原因與好處）
      I hope that the use of public bicycles will become more and more popular and everyone can live a low-carbon life．（自己的感想）
                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua．

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類寫作是近年高考英語書面表達的熱點題型，命題人 通常以提綱作文的形式考查書信、報道、通知、日記、發(fā)言稿、對某人或某物的介紹、歡迎詞等．提綱作文的選材范圍很廣，內(nèi)容簡單易懂，且多是考生熟悉的話題．這類題型的主要特點 是要點明確，范圍具體．但考生也容易受中文提綱的制約，將 書面表達變成了翻譯，造成語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯上的單調(diào)，甚至寫 出結(jié)構(gòu)不完整的句子．