Question

18．下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤．請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在下面加上該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分
This summer holiday，which I'm looking forward for，is coming．What great fun that it is to go fishing!Play football is one of my hobby．I can ride my bike，climb high mountains，and go swimming．Sometimes I can play chess with your grandfather．How interested my holiday will be!But my father was always afraid I might be hurt：drop from water，fall off a tree，hurt by a truck or something．But if I'm careless enough，how will these things happen？I must try best to persuade him．

Answer 1

分析 我期待的暑假就要來(lái)到了．我可以去釣魚(yú)，踢足球，騎自行車(chē)，爬山等，我還可以和爺爺下象棋，但是爸爸卻擔(dān)心我會(huì)受到傷害，落水，從樹(shù)上掉下來(lái)，被車(chē)撞到等其他事情，但是如果我足夠細(xì)心，怎么會(huì)發(fā)生這些事情呢？我會(huì)盡力說(shuō)服他的．

解答 This summer holiday，which I'm looking forward for，is coming．What great fun that it is to go fishing!Play football is one of my hobby．I can ride my bike，climb high mountains，and go swimming．Sometimes I can play chess with your grandfather．How interested my holiday will be!But my father was always afraid I might be hurt：drop from water，fall off a tree，∧hurt by a truck or something．But if I'm careless enough，how will these things happen？I must try∧best to persuade him．
詳解：
1．for改為to；考查固定搭配，look forward to 是固定短語(yǔ)，意為"期待…"．
2．去掉that；考查感嘆句，What great fun  it is to go fishing！是一個(gè)感嘆句型，這里it作形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是不定式短語(yǔ)，在句中what是一個(gè)多余成分，所以去掉．
3．Play 改為Playing；考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，這里用動(dòng)名詞形式在句中作主語(yǔ)．
4．hobby改為hobbies；考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，one of 后面要跟名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式表示一個(gè)范圍．
5．your改為my；考查人稱(chēng)代詞，結(jié)合上下文分析句意應(yīng)為"有時(shí)我可以和爺爺下象棋"，所以此處應(yīng)該用人稱(chēng)代詞my．
6．interested改為interesting；考查分詞作形容詞，現(xiàn)在分詞作形容詞修飾物，過(guò)去分詞作形容詞修飾人，這里修飾holiday，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作形容詞．
7．was改為is；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，結(jié)合上下文分析，此處應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)陳述一個(gè)事實(shí)情況．
8．hurt前面加be；考查被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，I和動(dòng)詞hurt是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故前面加be構(gòu)成被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)．
9．careless改為careful；考查句意，分析句意應(yīng)為"但是如果我足夠細(xì)心，怎么會(huì)發(fā)生這些事情呢"，所以這里用careful．
10．best前面加my；考查固定搭配，try one's best 是固定搭配，意為"盡某人最大的努力"．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 通過(guò)快速閱讀短文了解短文的基本大意，再分析句子間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，從詞義，詞性，固定短語(yǔ)，句式結(jié)構(gòu)等方面去找文中存在的錯(cuò)誤加以修改．