【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Last summer I had a chance to visit Paris. That attracted me most was the Eiffel Tower, where has become a symbol of France. I was deeply impressed by their height. I have never seen such tall building before! It is made of iron and it is about 7000 tons heavy. There have 1711 steps from the bottom to the top. Climb the tower made me very tired, but I was very exciting. I took a lot of photo in Paris.

I have much memories and experiences to share. I will remember my trip to the France forever!

【答案】

【1】That改為What

【2】where改為which

【3】their改為 its

【4】such ∧ a

【5】 have 改為are

【6】Climb改為 Climbing

【7】exciting改為 excited

【8】photo改為 photos

【9】much改為 many

【10】刪除the

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，敘述了去年夏天我到巴黎旅行參觀埃菲爾鐵塔的故事。

【1】That改為What 考查主語從句。本句中what引導(dǎo)主語從句并在句中做主語。句意：

【2】where改為which 考查定語從句。本題定語從句的先行詞是the Eiffel Tower,關(guān)系代詞which指代先行詞在句中做主語。

【3】their改為 its 考查代詞。本句中it指代the Eiffel Tower，后面有名詞height，所以使用所有格its的。

【4】such ∧ a 考查不定冠詞。不定冠詞a/an表示泛指，通常修飾可數(shù)名詞。本句中building是可數(shù)名詞，使用a修飾，泛指一棟高樓。

【5】have 改為are 考查固定句式。句式“There be......有.....”，而“have”也表示“有....”，這兩個結(jié)構(gòu)不能連用。

【6】Climb改為 Climbing 考查動名詞。本句中動名詞短語climbing the tower在句中作主語，動詞短語不能做主語。

【7】exciting改為 excited 考查形容詞。過去分詞轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞excited通常修飾人或與人有關(guān)的事物，exciting通常修飾事物。句意：登上埃菲爾鐵塔讓我很疲憊，但是我很興奮。

【8】photo改為 photos 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。形容詞短語a lot of許多，可以修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，也可以修飾不可數(shù)名詞。本句中photo是可數(shù)名詞，所以要使用復(fù)數(shù)形式photos.

【9】much改為 many 考查形容詞。形容詞many通常修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，much通常修飾不可數(shù)名詞。本句中名詞memories是可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以使用形容詞many修飾。

【10】刪除the 考查定冠詞。France在專有名詞，要單獨使用，不需要定冠詞。

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