Question

9．假定你是李華．你收到了美國筆友彼得寄來的最新英文小說．請給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．小說收到；
2．回贈禮物；
3．禮物意義；
4．邀請來華．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive the novel．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life．
I know you're interested in Chinese festivals，and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere．I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China．
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于禮物的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一感謝禮物；二回贈禮物以及禮物意義；三邀請來華．
高分句型：
1．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．句子里as引導定語從句，代指先行詞a lovely gift，和such呼應．
感謝你這份可愛的禮物，這一直是我期盼的．
2．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere句子里which引導非限制性定語從句，代指先行詞Paper cutting．
剪紙是中國文化傳承的獨特形式之一，它經(jīng)常用于裝飾歡樂氣氛的．

解答 Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive the novel．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．【高分句型一】This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life．（感謝禮物）
I know you're interested in Chinese festivals，and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere．【高分句型二】I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China．（回贈禮物以及禮物意義）
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person．（邀請來華）
Best wishes．
Yours，
                                                                         Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
寫作文注重句式的變化．常用的句式變化的運用有：簡單句轉(zhuǎn)化為并列句或復合句；主動態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)化為被動態(tài)；陳述轉(zhuǎn)為倒裝；一般句轉(zhuǎn)化為強調(diào)句；肯定轉(zhuǎn)化為反義詞表達或雙重否定；狀語從句轉(zhuǎn)化為分詞短語作狀語；定語從句轉(zhuǎn)化為分詞短語作定語等等．例如：
　　①The　teacher　said　that　the　plan　was　good．轉(zhuǎn)化為　The　teacher　said　that　the　plan　was　not　bad．
　�、赪hen　the　audience　heard　the　strange　noise，they　all　ran　out　of　the　hall　to　see　what　happened．轉(zhuǎn)化為　Hearing　the　strange　noise，the　audience　all　ran　out　of　the　hall　to　see　what　happened