Question

目前，青少年追星成為一個(gè)非常普遍的現(xiàn)象。有些青少年對(duì)偶像崇拜(celebrity worship)近乎癡迷。請(qǐng)你就青少年追星這一話題寫一篇英語短文。要點(diǎn)包括:

1. 你如何看待青少年追星這一現(xiàn)象;

2. 青少年追星對(duì)其自身有何影響。

注意:

可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容完整充實(shí)。

詞數(shù)： 120 左右。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

These days probably every teenager in the world has a poster of someone they worship stuck on their wall .For some teens , celebrity worship is simply a part of maturing and entering the adolescent world .There is nothing to worry about .Celebrities who promote ethical behavior and make responsible personal decisions can have a positive effect on teenagers .But for some teenagers who develop an unhealthy obsession with a celebrity , parents and teachers should pay a lot of attention .They are so obsessed with celebrities that they cannot concentrate on their studies .They expect to live like a celebrity so that they often do something impractical .

While it is normal for teenagers to idolize some celebrities , parents should take action if they suspect a teen is too obsessed with celebrities and becoming indifferent to school .They should encourage their children to become involved with school activities .Also , I think the celebrities should set a good example of how to live and act to have positive effects on their fans.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求就青少年追星這一話題寫一篇英語短文。要點(diǎn)包括:1. 你如何看待青少年追星這一現(xiàn)象;2. 青少年追星對(duì)其自身有何影響。寫作時(shí)要注意：1.使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；2.可以使用兩段來分別介紹兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)；3. 注意連詞的恰當(dāng)使用。4.寫作時(shí)盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯和多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，以提高文章檔次，增加得分點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，語言通順流暢。作者首段介紹了當(dāng)今這種崇拜明星，追星的現(xiàn)象，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。第二段闡明了盲目追星對(duì)青少年的不良影響。在文中作者使用了高級(jí)詞匯obsess，promote，impractical等。還有定語從句who promote ethical behavior，狀語從句While it is normal for teenagers to idolize some celebrities ,的使用也提高了文章的檔次。

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